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goonybag 
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Galactic Reprisal' and post your comments here!!!
my latest, strugglin a little with the mix, but workin on it. Has a bit of a story behind it, I wont bore you with the details, hope you enjoy!
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15-04-2007 07:41 |
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tryptech
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nice one
idont like the drums in the beginning but when the bass comes in i think its totally kicking
really loved that bassline and it's sounds so good although its prettysimple, less is more
in de beginning i would soften your kick and snare a little
cause theyre a little up to he front
thats my meaning
but track is good
greetz
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15-04-2007 11:13 |
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Tomos
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Yep, brilliant track. Like Scaranja, I don't like the drums in the beginning. They're too obvious, too 'standard', not interesting enough. They sound a bit flat too.
The opening melody is really, really good. I like it a lot. It builds up nicely, flows well and the bass is soft and melodic. The only thing I would incorporate, if this was my track, would be some spacey, echo-laden sounds which use high-pitches. It just needs something extra to lift it a little. Soft, spacey, female vocals would probably work well.
The heavy second part is great too. You've incorporated some extra snare in there, which I like because it sounds full-on and heavy. Brilliant! I don't think I'd change this part of the song.
Overally - 8.5/10!
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15-04-2007 14:03 |
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BattleDrone
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Hihat in the beginning is thin, drums are too standard, like the poppy atmo. Bass could use some sub. Break is ok. Second part is ok on its own, but both parts of the track are so far awayfrom eachother that they don´t match anymore. Also there´s no single element from the first part that is appearing in the second (and thus could make the track a whole). Shame really.
Imagine this being played at a party, people who go crazy in the beginning will find the second part too hard. People who like the second part will be bored by the first part and a lot of people will think the DJ has not taken the time to choose records that make the change of styles "digestable".
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15-04-2007 20:53 |
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Seven Gun
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not bad that!
intro is a little repetetive and could do with been shorter......or....
varying the melodie a bit and maybe adding a nice
haunting vocal.
think the low bpms takes something away from the energy of your track. i prefer em higher.......but thats just me.
although not my personal taste......this tune is quite cool.
work a bit more on this and i think ya could have a very good sound on your hands.
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16-04-2007 00:21 |
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GeeZZ
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roller f real love the bassline n the changes is this a preview?
u shud av a 2nd breakn bring bak that organ at the begining that wud really round it off tie it all 2 gether n make it a BIG sound
the drop is heavy how it jus jump straight into thoose madness jungle drums
u shud do a 2nd drop
i d like a hi pitch squeak rave horn with a tempo based delay onit onthe drop ( if u get me, cant think of track names for eg.) on the kic,snare,kic,snare,kic,snare....fadining out. drop it a coupple o times in the intro then on the drop.
the first lidten i gave it i found it a bit shit jus cos the vocals sound a bit cheesy 30 seconds and bass, bass, bass, hears it so much dont fink it suits d tune can allways create you own dount need a good mic adds 2 the charm, jus add effects it you cant find somthin you allowed to use.
fat tune still respec
ps. drums in the intro to hard to like lic the drums in the main lic
once again bbbbbrrrrrap fat tune
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by GeeZZ: 17-04-2007 10:27.
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