 JayG - 30 min of fame |
JayG 
Producer
Registration Date: 05-04-2007
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Please check out my new track '30 min of fame' and post your comments here!!!
just made this one. tryed to use some loskool syths with a new skool flavor hope you all enjoy max respect
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14-04-2007 18:32 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The synth sounds a bit blurry, did you use chorus on it? Some melodies sound a bit far fetched for me. The track is in lack of a bass sound.
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15-04-2007 20:58 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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You use way too much stereo enhancing, most of the sounds are on the edge of being out of phase. There is no stereo placement, everything is just wide. Switch to mono and almost nothing is left.
I don't like the melodies, a bit too simplistic maybe. Gets boring quickly.
Soundwise it is not bad, balance is geared heavily towards the synths, the drums are buried. I like the drum programming in the beginning of the track, with the fast kick drums.
Try redoing the track without stereo spread and chorus 
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21-04-2007 15:19 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the old scool break, that's uncompressed and in teh far background. the kick sounds independant of the drums int he background. i mean it's got groove though. the break down is good. that break doens't seme tob e enough. i swear if you distorted it a bit, and made it crunch it would be bigger and not so tiny in comparision to the massive synths.
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22-04-2007 10:23 |
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reggez
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Registration Date: 20-03-2007
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don't use "standard presets" 
you've used very old samples. try to find new one..
work on compession... beat is weak
where is sub ?
cheers ... sry for my ingrish
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22-04-2007 12:13 |
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