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dj milkman dj milkman is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Worms Outcry' and post your comments here!!!

This is a tune i have made up using a sample pack from drum n bass wiki. it a sample pack from the old classic game worms. this is basically finished i just wana bit of advise and people opinion on how to improve and generally what people think.

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14-04-2007 18:05 Homepage of dj milkman
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You could do so much more with this...
throughout the track I was constantly waiting for the REAL drums to punch in massively. Just layer some meanass snare & Bassdrum onto that break and kick it in after a minute and you´ll have a steaming track. Now it feels like sex with clothes on Devil .

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14-04-2007 18:35 Homepage of BattleDrone
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Nice try but it sounds very flat to me and uninspiring. The melodies, samples and sounds are very repetative. The song doesn't seem to go anywhere interesting and it could easily have been 4 minutes long, as opposed to 6.

It's not a disater but it is very lightweight.

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15-04-2007 14:54 Homepage of Tomos
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cheers for ur opinions.

What could i do to make it less repetative then?

and how would i go about changing the drums shud i change them completely or just like speed them up and give them more of an impact?

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15-04-2007 18:57 Homepage of dj milkman
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This song has lots of potential
you have an unbelievable feeling for harmonics, an its just a chill on
just the bass i dont see the bass fitting n the whole
and i would put a little reeverb on that begin gameboy thngy
youre thral has nce buildup
an its not flat at all
on my monitors (mackie)

You should make spacey tracks, i see you as having lots of potential in getting many sound in their place without them clipping or sounding completely out of key


SO keep up
Produce loud, pump your speakers tot the max
but do not blow them

Cheerz

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16-04-2007 01:13 Homepage of tryptech
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Intro to this track is pretty cool.

In repsonse to your question "how would i go about changing the drums shud i change them completely or just like speed them up and give them more of an impact?"

I think the drums are a bit too old skool - they very alix reece style from back in like 1994/1995. most artists use very full drums nowadays even in minimal dnn. To get a fuller sound, layer mulitple snare samples and kick samples behind each other. Also add some ghost snares, delayed hats. Layer some other breaks behind as well.

dont feel too contrained by the sample pack its self - think of a sample packs as ur servant not your master.

Bassline is ok, needs a lot more sub underneath.

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