 JayG - My Happpiest NiteMare |
JayG 
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Registration Date: 05-04-2007
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Please check out my new track 'My Happpiest NiteMare' and post your comments here!!!
kk my last tune i put up sucked lol but i made it 4-5 years ago and idid know much this track is made in 2007 this is what im about and mystyle.max respecr and all comments are safe. hope you all like it
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14-04-2007 02:28 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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not bad track mate.
first part of the intro is good........loses its way at 1.06....maybe ya should slam the full speed break in at that point?!?!
i felt that i was waiting too long for the main drop.
when it did drop there was no "surprise" element to it but
it was still ok.
further in i think ya need some more variation in bass samples and notes.
mixdown sounded good on headphones tho.
anyways.....ok tune bro.....6/10 for me.
peeeaaace maaan 
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14-04-2007 04:26 |
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Patlabor
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Registration Date: 07-04-2007
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hey
yea nice track real cool intro
the way you let the beat kick in: real cool too, but
it's a shame that the intro is so long and it kicks at +/- 2:00min.
perhaps bit to long imo.(and i'm not really liking the bassdrum.. but that's mo)
you did a great job
Keep'em coming 
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14-04-2007 13:00 |
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goonybag
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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sounds like you have put a lot of time into the drum programming here, nice one, reminds me of Aphex Twin type stuff. the main synth gets a little repetitive imo,maybe try different filters at times, or cut it up a bit in places, a slicer may work nicely and work well with the drum rolls etc.
really dig your drum programming, all single hit edits?
goony
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15-04-2007 08:23 |
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Tomos
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Registration Date: 15-04-2007
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Great build-up - best part of the song actually, because after a minute or so starts to fall flat somewhat. The bass line is good but becomes quite repetitive after a while. The main drop is pretty good and you can definitely jive to the beat but it sounds a little reserved and conservative for me. It needs to be more full-on and heavier. And you need to give the bass a new variation when the main drop kicks in. This would inject some real energy and suprise into the track. You need people to go "Wow!" when the drop kicks in. And it's not there right now.
Overall: 7/10.
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15-04-2007 15:10 |
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JayG
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thanks for the comments guys maxx respect . the drumn lines are done with slicer . keep the comments coming
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15-04-2007 18:03 |
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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bassline has a distinc sound of being digital, but it gets repatative, should have gotten to a bit more of a flowing bassline after 2 bars...
variety is art.
yea if you did change the drums up afte 2 bars and then dorpped them and returned to that other basline it would sound good, the first bline would forshadow this drop.
you need some sort of pad to help flesh out the drop though.
you got a bassline, drums, you're missing a middle sound to fill inbetween the highs of drums and the low of bass to give a good drop.
good mix though,
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18-04-2007 21:27 |
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