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tryptech 
Tryptech
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Please check out my new track 'Springbreak' and post your comments here!!!
Due to the nice wheather in Belgium, i was influenced to make this one, chilled out etc.
I expect some comments on equalizing, an song structure.
Greetz to all you fellow DNB headz
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12-04-2007 19:06 |
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philbee
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yeah man,ive only given it a quickie listen,but man yeah,the weather over here in da uk is pretty fucin cool as well and yah tune is complementin my evenin,lovin the way(is it a lyric?)that you bring that noize up an down in the mix,when the bass comes it could be a touch louder(imo)but structure wise yeah its all good,really quite trippy in places,also likin(what sounds like)a police siren(is it)!!nice peace,
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12-04-2007 19:20 |
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tryptech
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just vanguard and a sample of some piano and cello and a little fucked up
but glad you liked it
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12-04-2007 19:28 |
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wrm
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hey Man, checking your tune...the intro sound a bit off key imo, well at least the sounds dont fit into each other. Fix the melodies and it would be alright. the break after 2nd drop is too tiny, layer it with some more powerful break to make it sound richer. mmm I am not sure about this one bro, the sounds just dont fit. The structure is strange to be honest, the 2nd part is like another tune, doesnt fit in there, the only thing that conects it is that ambient background with those strings or whateva. Work it
add some more suitable tones and better FX. The EQ sounds good. Although some sounds could be lil more silent. Like the pad that fades in from time to time.
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12-04-2007 22:44 |
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Seven Gun
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the tune is ok man, not bad.
nice sampling, i just think some of em dont fit together too well.
listened on shitty headphones so cant give a full on review.
will check again tomoz.
peace!
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13-04-2007 04:23 |
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GreatFisherCat
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ooh yeaa
Ok, I got some mixed feelings from this. Is this supposed to be rollin or chillin? I reckon chillin... and review it such.
Intro is wonderful, I got this feeling that some of the melodies (these are samples, right?) are clashing to each other, perhaps out of tune, but somehow, I do not mind.
Generally, this tune works quite well. It does not give me massive emotions, but works, is nifty tune and I could think myself listening it just for leisure. How ever, mixing, especially EQ needs some work.
Snare/kick are a _bit_ too loud in general. Try putting them on a group and getting them down a little, 2-4dB or so.
Kick drum is boxy, try eq 250Hz down like 3-6dB, add some body at 100-150Hz.
Bassline at 1:40 onwards is very cool in it's lo-fi attitude. Generally this tune has just sub bass, if someone would listen your tune in laptop with it's internal speakers, bassline and perhaps even kick could not be heard at all. Try giving it some space in upper area, boost wide area of 300-4kHz a bit until you hear it in shitty radios too. Also try sharp eq somewhere, emm.. 4kHz? (?) to give it some raspy edge. Or layer the sound with electric guitar bass sound.
Then I've been copy pasting my mixing tip to everyone today, applies you too:
Try importing a professional dnb tune which you think is similar, into your sequence. Now take a notebook, analytically listen the pro track and yours one after one, try to see how your mixing could be improved to get closer to pro track. Listen instrument and element after another. Preferably do this with fresh ears, in morning for example.
Also check frequency spectrum with Voxengo Span ( http://www.voxengo.com/group/freevst/ ) .
Get your hands to Computer Music 111, it's DnB tutorial would be very beneficial to you in terms of mixing advice.
Allright, good try, you got my head nodding 
-Mikko
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13-04-2007 09:37 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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I agree with GreatFisherCat.
add to that: highpass your bassdrum at +/- 80 Hz to get rid of the sub bass part. It should punch through, not drown the mix with subbass.
Songstructure is indeed chaotic or even n-existing. I find that part hard too.
Not a bad track at all though.
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13-04-2007 09:42 |
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Lemon
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Registration Date: 21-02-2007
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I really did like the tune.
Although there's a lot of stuff mixed together in the intro, and in the whole piece, I'm taking complete peace without. Somehow it just seems to work well for me. Atmosphere is exactly like said: springbreak.
Centerpart tune doesn't really fit into the rest, agree, and bass should be bit deeper, like fish said, to be heard even on my laptop.
Overall I really expect this to get big.
Tune in, chill out.
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13-04-2007 10:41 |
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goonybag
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a little more "experimental" in sound/composition, in places I really like it, but there are a few samples/synth sounds that stick out a bit too much. overall it has a shaddowy mood to me, but really needs a little more work on the mix, tryo to add more dynamics. keep at it for sure
hope i have been of some help.
goony
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