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Paracyte 
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
Registration Date: 07-12-2006
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kinda' funny 
old skool thats for sure !
nice reees and drums sounds to be allright ,melo which starts the song is boring ,and i think is not realy workin with the rest of tune,but for 2002 think it will be allright 
can't really say anything about quality because I listen that in work on screen speakers 
nice work.
big up
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10-04-2007 03:34 |
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JayG
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Registration Date: 05-04-2007
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i did this track for pure fun. i just thought it would be fun to see what you all think of it
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10-04-2007 03:53 |
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Patlabor
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Registration Date: 07-04-2007
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hey!
lol cool track, real funny
in most music styles oldschool sounds funny in my
2007-music-oriented-ears and so does this track
but you did a good job 
cheErz 
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10-04-2007 19:35 |
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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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yo dude, finally some fresh ideas...sounds really nice, the reece is really nice. Dunno why but the track reminds me of good ol´prodigy
maybe its because the used similar samples( I mean breaks). The voice sample gets really anoying, try to get rid of it. But i def like it. Nice track dude, refreshing. And just one thing...try to put the break more in front, its kinda in the background, the reece overpowers it. cheers
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10-04-2007 22:39 |
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rodi
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Registration Date: 25-03-2007
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grrr that trancy synth is annoying me ! 
Ah finaly u droped it , i can't hear the kick , do it do it do it
Sort out the bass , beat , synth , cuz they sound on top of eachother , if u know what i mean
good luck
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11-04-2007 15:03 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Registration Date: 21-06-2005
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Toy sounds n' Bass!
first, I am not giving you any mercy just because your tune is 4 years old. You should have posted it 4 years ago!
In 5 minutes long tune that main melody rips my head off. I am ready to kill the DJ, if he goes and rewinds this one..... This happens for two reasons:
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
You repeat 2-bar melody loop like 2gazillion times.
Annoying? YES!
secondly, sound is very harsh, with bright top end, no effects, no reverb, nothing to smooth it off. Drop in effects, filter sweeps, layer the melody with other sounds repeating the same, use pads etc.
This melody is in front of the song, so it should be such that it stands on it's own. Work variation to this melody, until you can solo the lead melody 8and it's components) and listen it alone whole song, without urge to start making very dangerous things with strudy rope and a neck....
Beats are bit silent in comparison to main melody, bass line is off tune, and clashing with main melody, so there are reasons to nags, but when those rolling drums start, all is forgotten. You got potential in here, hidden somewhere. Bassline / drums interact very very well, that funny vocal loop that sounds like swedish gay man going "byxor, byxor byxor min byxor är online" ( "Trousers, trousers trousers my trousers are online") gives me laughs. Reese at 3:40 - 4:00 works well.
Finally, overall mixing is ok, but not super. import a tune you like very much to your sequencer, and do a A/B comparison, trying to copy ideas from pro tune to yours. propably you'll add top end to drums and hihats, narrow some element's frequency area to keep things from clashing.
Ok, nice try, time to upload the latest tracks!
-Mikko
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by GreatFisherCat: 13-04-2007 08:49.
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13-04-2007 08:47 |
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JayG
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i figured you guys would say something like that i luv this idea of this track and wanted to revamp it but had lost the flp to do so. its its gone but im uplaoding two more track that ive made in the last year so. plz dont judge me on this one it was just a test on how you honest you guys would be with me hope you enjoy my new tunes
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13-04-2007 21:54 |
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JayG
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[quote]Originally posted by GreatFisherCat
Toy sounds n' Bass!
first, I am not giving you any mercy just because your tune is 4 years old. You should have posted it 4 years ago!
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im not sure if you noticed my registeration date.... but ive only been apart of this forum for about two weeks.... nice 1st impression. check da other two i got uploaded.... peace
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15-04-2007 03:52 |
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