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Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Please check out my new track 'Cryiogenic' and post your comments here!!!
Hi
This one is made some time ago,hope you enjoy it.God Bless.
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08-04-2007 16:25 |
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CULTURE BOY
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Registration Date: 12-01-2007
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THIS TRACK HAS A REAL VIRUS REC'S FEEL TO IT. THE INTRO IS NICE WITH U USING SOME NICE AMBIENCE N I ALSO LIKE THE VOCAL'S THAT YOU USE. THESE GIVE A REAL TECH FEEL TO THE INTRO. THE BEATS YOU HAVE USED FIT QUITE WELL IN TO THE OVERALL MOULD OF THE TUNE. THINK ITS QUITE EASY TO TELL THAT YOU MADE THIS A WHILE AGO... I THINK IT HAS A 2004 TYPE FEEL TO IT AND REMINDS ME OF A FEW TRACKS THAT WERE RELISED AROUND THAT TIME. OVERALL I THINK THAT THIS IS QUITE A NICE TUNE N GIVEN THE RIGHT CROWD WOULD GET THE DANCE MOVING BIG UP.
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08-04-2007 16:51 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Cheers bro !
Nice to read that you like it ,maybe some time i will consider rework but,for now im happy with that one 
Cheers man !
Big up !
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08-04-2007 18:26 |
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Seven Gun
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easy bruvah!
not bad not bad!
your kick needs more clarity and punch......it is a bit muffled.
nice techy sounds tho...just needs cleaning up a little!
subs could be a bit angrier too.
overall good tune tho.
go back to this one and remaster it a bit.........then ya will have a winner on ya hands!
big up!
if ya could return the review n vote favour, i'd much apreesh!
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08-04-2007 23:51 |
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Paracyte
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Cheers Bro.
I will ,I will.
Thank's for review.
God Bless,
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09-04-2007 00:24 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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Originally posted by demolitionkid
yes the song has a great feel to it bro.the drums are a lil low in volume.the subs are low too.some of the synths seem out of place,they to be panned wide.maybe add a synth thats mono down the middle to get back that thinkness.excellent track though 
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09-04-2007 16:52 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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hmmm....not sure what happened there sry
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09-04-2007 16:53 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Cheers man !
Thanks for review
jeah i will rework a bit ,
after those positive comments
big up man !
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09-04-2007 17:30 |
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beatinYou
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Registration Date: 12-04-2007
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This song definitely has some spot-on parts. The middle, for a couple measures, where the voice is talking by itself, I felt that it needed some new idea behind it to support it. Other than that, wonderful job, I loved the variety of the beats and the synths, but most of all how they were arranged.
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13-04-2007 05:40 |
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GreatFisherCat
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Ok, not bad, not bad at all...
This tune has many good pointers, especially when it gets going around 1:30 to this wonderfull world of atmospheric pads and rolling drums, I cannot avoid nodding my head. Drop around 2:30 is creating tension, me wanting the drums back, and when they come, they still withold the energy, so in clubs I would be wavin my hands like a maniac around 4:00, when main melody gets going.
While writing this review I must have listened this tune like 5-7 times, and it tolerates long listening.
Atmosphere and idea- wise this is a star, 9/10 !
then nags.
This tune falls from it's top podium because of poor mixing. There are many issues, but mostly mix is muddy (frequency wise instruments are clashing - using same frequency space) and lacking highest top end.
Word samples are also very hard to understand, take low end away from the speech, from 300Hz downwards, boost 1-4kHz atleast 6-10dB to get started. Also try sharp Q equalization around 8-12kHz to get letter "S" more sharp.
If you're using drum loops, and separate snare/kick, cut everything below 350Hz away from loops, to let kick/snare come through.
Also try importing a professional dnb tune which you think is similar, into your sequence. Now take a notebook, analytically listen the pro track and yours one after one, try to see how your mixing could be improved to get closer to pro track. Listen instrument and element after another. Preferably do this with fresh ears, in morning for example.
Also check frequency spectrum with Voxengo Span ( http://www.voxengo.com/group/freevst/ ) .
Get your hands to Computer Music 111, it's DnB tutorial would be very beneficial to you in terms of mixing advice.
Overall, 6-7 /10, good effort that can be remixed to be top track.
-Mikko
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by GreatFisherCat: 13-04-2007 09:07.
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13-04-2007 07:56 |
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Paracyte
Crazy Bouncin Sinusoid
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Wow !
Thats a longest review what i recieve until now, thanks very much for the advises ,for detailed review and pointing what needs to be done.
I will rework this tune,
thanx
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13-04-2007 12:35 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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the kick seems dull but ti's punch, just needs something with more high layerd on.
the vocals are also a bit muffled because there dull also.
the synths and everything esle sounds good, like the atmosphere.
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13-04-2007 14:47 |
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