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Please check out my new track 'Taj Mahal' and post your comments here!!!
This is a new one made with new equippment.Hope You enjoy it.Kinda experimental i think.God Bless.
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06-04-2007 19:56 |
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sssonarrr
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after quickly skippen through the track it sounds alright. i need to listen to this a bit better and at a better time, but it deffo sounds all-right
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06-04-2007 21:09 |
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07-04-2007 03:21 |
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07-04-2007 04:28 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Vox at 22 come in rather loud and abrubtly IMO.
Your drums could use a bit more UMPH. I suggest adding some layers to the bass drum and the snare.
The amen, IMO, seems oddly out of place when it comes in. I wasn't expecting an amen all. Not sure if this is a good or bad thing.
Song structure is a little bit boring. It's weird again when the amen disappears and you go back to your other break. There doesn't seem to be much of a reason for the length of time the amen is used in the middle. IMO I would either make this an amen track or eliminate the amen completely. It seems rather disjointed; like 2 seperate songs.
The Indian, piano, and synth elements are pretty nice, tho a tad boring. I think you could also add some effects here and ther on those elements. Maybe some delay on the piano, for example.
Keep at it, I think this has potential.
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07-04-2007 06:50 |
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Cheers bro,
Will think about make a whole track amen ,good idea ,it is bit boring what can i say,new equippment ,kinda experimental will rework 
cheers for opinion.
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07-04-2007 07:42 |
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08-04-2007 03:46 |
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cynik
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cool start. Id put more attack on them vocals.
bass sounds nice and round
bits and parts I like. around 3:30 before the piano
amen and the piano are not really fitting.
seems like a rushed job alltogether
it does have potential, work on it more
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08-04-2007 10:03 |
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That's right cynik ,i was rushin'
just because it is first new born baby on new equppment so i Want to send it to people,not good idea after all i guess,but will rework.Cheers for comment.
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09-04-2007 01:14 |
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QUITE A DEEP PROGRESSIVE TRACK HERE. FIRST OF ALL THE BEATS SEEMED A LITTLE FLAT, MAYBE A FEW ROLLERS WOULD ROUNDEN THEM OFF AND ALSO MAYBE A FEW MORE HI HATS THROWN IN. THE INTRO AMBIENCE HAD A DEEP MELODIC VIBE TO IT WHICH BUILDS UP A GOOD TENSION TO THE TRACK.THE VOCAL SAMPLE U USED IS VERY NICE GOOD REVERB ADDED TO THIS I THINK. THE BASS COULD DO WITH BEEN A LITTLE LOUDER AND MAYBE ALITTLE MORE STABBY IN PLACE'S. MAYBE ADD A FEW SITAR SAMPLE'S IN TO THE INTRO TO "TAJ MAHAL" THE FEEL UP. DEEP SOULFULL AND MELODIC ARE THE BEST WAY I CAN DESCRIBE THIS TRACK. LIKE THE FEEL, NICE TRACK
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09-04-2007 16:51 |
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Cheers man,
This one will be reworked ,not the whole idea just the points ,
a master a bit and a maybe some small add on's
Thanks for review ,
Big up !
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10-04-2007 01:22 |
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rodi
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Vocals @ 0:22 come too quick , make them come out more smoother ...
Change the bass 2nd note every 2nd beating - in the intro ( i mean : 1st note - subs ; 2nd - abit wobbly 1 . chage that "wobbly" note with the higher or lower one )
keep dem comming
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