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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Asia district' and post your comments here!!!
An early stage of this track...all comments are highly aprreciated...cheers
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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04-04-2007 23:34 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Sounds promising. Maybe you should add some filters on the violin loop because it's to obvious that it is a loop and it tends to get boring.
No big issues otherwise, needs work ofcourse, but as you said "early stage"... I shut up 
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04-04-2007 23:51 |
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Seven Gun
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Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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easy dude!
like the sound........is v nice on the ear.
just one thing............
the cello (whatever it is? lol) is going out of time with the beat
at times........its very off putting for me.........i started nodding
my head...then it timed out.........and my nodding got confused!
thats it realy bud.......just sort that out.
good sounds....peace!
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06-04-2007 16:42 |
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thechronic
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Nice start with the cello 
Very original track, I like it, the drums sound nice too.
You are layering two kick drums, or the kick drum with something else and this causes clicks at the start of the kick.
Bass is a bit too woolly, could use some more mid.
Looking forward to hearing a more finished version!
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21-04-2007 15:24 |
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D Juice
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Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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This is a really nice atmo you're creating here.
I'm just really tellin you that there is no real bassdrum, what comes as a bassdrum in your track sounds to me more like a downpitched shorter-lenghted snaredrum ; it doesnt carry any low frequency, at least, on headphones it doesnt.
one other thing i didnt like was the beat, when it comes in, it doesnt really seem to fit the melody, know what i mean? maybe try to shove the melody up a little bit so it fits a little better, it'll probably a little smoother afterwards.
After all i think i want to hear some more variation in the track and a more exciting intro.
You have definetly set up a tight preparation for the track but some work still needs to be fixed.
Cheers, keep it up,
D Juice 
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