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dj milkman 
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Please check out my new track 'Sergeant Underground' and post your comments here!!!
This track is half way been working on it for a couple of days now. just looking for some input and peoples opinion.
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04-04-2007 15:34 |
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D Juice
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awfully recognisable beat! isnt it a gridlok beat? two step or something like that i remember.
maybe layer it with some other beat would be nice if u dont want to just copy a whole beat. i dont like copied beats, but thats my opinion
well the track is just totally unfinished and i think that youre the one thats got to get some inspiration for it, so get yourself some more ideas and work it out a little more. i'll be glad to hear it when you worked it out better.
Chrz
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04-04-2007 16:58 |
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the kick on the intro has clipping on the end of it. so snip a little of the end of the sample (unless you wanted it to be like that)
tbh this sounds like an intro to me. Id shorten it a little then stick a big chilled breakdown with some sax in it (its quite a laid back vibe) then drop into a deep sub b line and turn it into a liquid roller.
just some thoughts.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by utter muppet: 04-04-2007 17:10.
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04-04-2007 17:10 |
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BattleDrone
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You have a little break at 1:50", but it's not going anywhere, make it a variation to the normal drums if you want to keep it "as is" or make it a real break. Indeed, you need to add some more ideas, the track needs a part "after the break" where things really get cooking. Good stuff, keep it comming.
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05-04-2007 19:09 |
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Seven Gun
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yo!
nice sounds.
think the kick is bit too loud.....its got a clickin goin on too......need to sort that.
track got quite a nice "roundness" about it, just need more of a drop (imho).
more bass and more mid and high end on that bass/pad/synth??
sounds ok tho.....pleasant stuff.
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06-04-2007 16:49 |
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artificial
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Registration Date: 04-04-2007
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im missing some cool bass sounds... it sounds kinda too much into the drum loop all the other sounds are stuck in the background... id bring them up ahead a little... also there is not much bass in your basss when it does come in.. its kinda just there and not building power in your track... that it should need. also some various changes in your drum loop would make the track interesting..
overall needs quite some work... im sure if you put some time into figuring out some cool stabs and bass sounds that it will become quite cool.
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06-04-2007 17:41 |
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dj milkman
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Cheers for the input
im working on this at the mo.
shall repost it up when im done.
thanks again.
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08-04-2007 00:54 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by dj milkman
Cheers for the input
im working on this at the mo.
shall repost it up when im done.
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the milkman posts twice.
internal combustion glitchy sounds 
umm good breaks and synth. all cool.
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08-04-2007 03:09 |
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