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hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Please check out my new track '10 Plagues' and post your comments here!!!

I stopped working on this at the end of Jan. Has some merit, but doesn't quite do it for me. Please let me know if you feel this track is worth finishing, and any comments also would be appreciated.

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04-04-2007 07:38 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
cynik cynik is a male
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cool intro

drops: that kick is way over the top, otherwise the drums are nice Drummer

Id up the tempo, or loosen a bit of release on the synths, maybe add a highat and/or ride line to the beats because it doesnt quite pick up anywhere

it does feel as you just started on it. worth finishing deffinitely

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04-04-2007 07:45 Homepage of cynik
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Bassdrum massive!!!




Track needs more variation I think.

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04-04-2007 15:20 Homepage of BattleDrone
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keep working on it.
07-04-2007 08:18
Patlabor Patlabor is a female
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good track
not finished yet imo,
i like the beat drop-in very much!
What i don't like is the pauses between
de hits in the intro, i mean the pauses
should be there but ther has to be a little continoues
bass now it really afkappen, don't know what that
means in english.
anyway good track original idea
keep it up Bigup

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11-04-2007 10:25
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Good job on intro ,psychedelic dark and vicious,really nice,vocals fit perfectly,good drop,bass line nice and thick.

good job man

cheers.

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12-04-2007 02:25
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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long begning, you could try to throw something else into there, it becomes predictable which is not spookie and eirie. that's where you can ahve fun and really experient!!!

that big kick that sounds like a tom drum, do a small cut to 150hz freq or around there to make it not soo boomy, and more punchy.

after the drop happens there's a pause, when it comes back you could throw in a bassline or a lead or something sick.


it's cool sound though.

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12-04-2007 11:42 Homepage of Halph-Price
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