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Surora23 Surora23 is a male
Agressive Melodic Disorder


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Please check out my new track 'Fiction' and post your comments here!!!

This track is what originally spark some interest as of late form some labels, however again.. no one wnats it Smile but thats all good... just solid practice yea?

Anyway i wanted this to be something similar to what dom&roland might do on moving shadow, but with my own surora vibe...

Lots of open rippin leads and some different sounds presented in Massive (big ups NI)

hope you enjoy.. its a lil long, but thats kinda intentional...

made with...

FL5
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Lots of samples & Vsts

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02-04-2007 20:06
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drums sound a bit muffled on the intro.
love the leads. some serious filth in this in places.

tbh the overall sound seems a bit strange. like its lost all its punch/thump.

the tune itself is heavy though.
02-04-2007 20:14
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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quality track. imho the muffled sound from the drums comes from the overpowered kick, but that's his personal preferance. compared to most every other dnb song, it sounds a bit bottem heavy.

the bass sounds a bit thin int eh begnig. you should try to get more sub in the mix. i don't know what your listening with to mix, tell me and i'll see what's up.

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03-04-2007 01:36 Homepage of Halph-Price
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Cheers Surora23,..solid mixdown,...yeah imo that kick is too on its own soundin,..to hard,..diggin the heafty bass,..thick! Evil ,...forshure feelin the ideas behind this and what you put down,..but maybe need's more variation,..you got it laid out to a tee,..this could be a huuge fucking tune,..but sounds kinda rushed as is imo,..anyway a heafty track & top notch production,..just me ideas,..cheers Surora.

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03-04-2007 03:03
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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cheers guys...

im mixing with acid pro... and hey not perfect yet right :-p

the drums are a bit odd in this but.. oh well lol..

keep em coming...

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03-04-2007 03:53
Seven Gun Seven Gun is a male
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intro..............
that beat is full on RIPPIN!!
nice pad too.
drop...............
BUH!!!......likin that! DIRT!
progresses very nicely....nice additions as we go along.
doesnt get boring.
yep........bad tune that!
i wouldnt change much to that track bud.
peace!!

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03-04-2007 04:15
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dont really like the beat. (snare & kick sound) doesnt really get me grooving. intro is lovely. nice atmospheres.. i think that bubble sounding delayed thingy is a bit overused. breakdown is great with the one shot hits. the bassline is good. maybe give it another try to make it excellent? Big Grin you could even combine it with a second one.

solid track i'd say Wink

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03-04-2007 10:09 Homepage of Rudeone
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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Love the bass growling in the intro. Everything fits, great mixdown, fantastic fx.

The snare sounds a bit too much "dog eat dog" imo.
Some of the leads sound too much like "warm trance" whereas the rest of the track sounds pretty hard and dark. If the leads were colder they would fit better and give the overall sound a plus.

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03-04-2007 16:34 Homepage of BattleDrone
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nice job on this. i think it could use a some drum play, as is the drums are quite repetitive, if you mixed it up with a few variations every 8 bars it would give the tune a lot more character. Bass sounds good, i agree that the trancey bits are a bit too light hearted and don't match the over all sound of the track, try detuning them slightly.

fake edit: this song sounds an awful lot like break - breathless
03-04-2007 23:41
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Cool intro.

Song builds nicely with great, full sounds and nice FX. Mix sounds very good.

I think I would like more of a basic 2 step beat instead of the beat you have with those extra bass drums. This is my preference of course, never did care for those Dillinja/Nightwalkerish
beats with the xtra bass drums.
I really do think this song would be vastly inproved with a more 2 step type drum pattern, as everything else I like quite a bit.

Drop could be better, but it works as it is all right.

Great bass sounds.

Production quality is very high.

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04-04-2007 01:38 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
Surora23 Surora23 is a male
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cheers all...

big ups for the reviews

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06-04-2007 19:07
Paracyte Paracyte is a male
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Nice bit psychedelic intro with theese woodenblocks on delay ,good beat ,nice kikin drumz, nice fx,very nice reece a bit too much chorus on it i think ,but it can be my fuckd up speakers in work Wink good job man ! love it ! 9/10

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07-04-2007 03:21
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Liking the bass synths and Effects ur running them through on this one. very tech, neurofunk. Think the bass drum is a tad too high volume around the 250Hz area or lower - Sounds very subby although the sub on the bass could do with a bit of turning up.

Apart from that excellent stuff from you as always.

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07-04-2007 21:13
cynik cynik is a male
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cool intro

snare could be pumped up, Id try different drums

really good soundchoices, love the bandpassed synth

imo the sound at 3.22 and later on is sticking out a bit, probably offkey or something, cant really put my finger on it

cool 4.05 switch back into the synth and drums, again that sound throws it away

otherwise its a cool little midset number

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08-04-2007 10:17 Homepage of cynik
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this tune is phat, got a great moving vibe to it. drums are phat, this 1 would be heavy on a dancefloor.
tight production
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09-04-2007 17:11
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