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Glim 
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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Please check out my new track 'Down Force' and post your comments here!!!
Started this got to the second breakdown..
first tune i've made in like 7 months...
does what it says on the tin
I WILL BE REVIEWING FUCK LOADS OF TRACKS LATER TONGHT, I GOTTA GO OUT - FUCKIN SHOPPIN!!
meh!
peace
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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24-03-2007 19:29 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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hmm..
not sure what went wrong here..
edit by thechronic: the track could not be downloaded initially due to a bug in the website, it has been fixed now
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24-03-2007 19:35 |
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rodi
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hmmm likin' the intro man !
The words sound too low can't hear them well need to listen closer , make them mo upfront
Just got to the 1st drop , it's a pitty that u didn't do it as a liquid tune 
Damn ... that beat what u've used after the drop doesn't sound so massive as the bass and the other samples , I suggest working on the mainbeat , and make the bass diffrent sometimes cuz its going over and over,it changes only on trashings ...
MMMM the tune restarted , damn man for me , cuz im a huge fan of liquid funk , i would make a massive liquid tune with that intro
Its too shining for a jumpy choon !
Cheers man , keep it rollin'
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25-03-2007 19:58 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Intro sounds totally liquid (which I like). I don't like half speed drumlines though
but thats personal taste. everything sounds well in the intro. Only the vocal doesn't stick out enough, it's missing presence and I can't understand it. The first drop comes quite late (but it's ok). The bass sound that starts at 1:51" sound overly quantised (too machine like). Past the drop I like the bass sound and the atmosphere, the bassline could be a little tighter to get the crowd boiling.. Again those vocals (a bit low on the highs?) at this point I find the whole thing to sound a bit too empty aswell. If you want to get it steaming it needs more action I think.
Nice to have you back on the productive side. This thingy sounds like "the streets" gone DnB
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25-03-2007 23:43 |
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Halph-Price
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nice intro nice pads. drums sound good, the hihats sound a bit serperate fromt eh rest though. give tehm simular reverb would help glue them together a bit.
the vocals are a bit dull and almost nasaly. eiteher crunch them a bit with distortion, or boost the high end. maybe bringing down the lower mids and but definatly the 2khz area is up, causing some nasal sound.
that might help give them more clarity. compression also helps.
the drop beyond that is awsome. a bit slow, but it goes nicely. good bassline.
i love the drum works.
but yea the vocals back sound to dull and dry. Delay, slight delay with very little mix helps most tracsk do that and it's almost un noticable, adn helps add some fatness. helps add syncopations if you have it just to the point where you barley notice it.
nice preview of a track.
this is what a preivew should be.
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25-03-2007 23:52 |
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Glim
Stuck In The Late Nineties
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cheers guys, im takin all of that onboard.
i really struggled with getting my vocals to fit in the tune
and i'll be going away with your advice in mind, cheers halph price.
Also the drop drums need to be re-worked, they sound messy and the bass riff needs tweaking and maybe variation on it
pleased with the results as its the first track i made in over half a year
will be doing plenty of reviews in a bit, trust me...
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26-03-2007 16:26 |
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XTensionTrigger
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Similar to Lsd I thing, too many mid bass'es for me but this is your concept possibly right, need lyrics in txt form 
cheers XTT...
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26-03-2007 20:02 |
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Seven Gun
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easy mate.
love the intro on this one, think
its really well written.
maybe drags a bit.........meh
not feelin the bass too much, just doesnt have that hook i was expecting from after intro.
but yeah man, ya got nice sounds.
you should get back on the case cause you can certainly make a decent dnb track.
peace.
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27-03-2007 03:11 |
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equipped
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Big Cheers Glim,..review in the work's!
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27-03-2007 05:41 |
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cynik
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cool intro.. half step part came a tad unexpected but once it got going its good
vocals muffled, sounds like you spittin it out old glim
Id rerecord
drops: a bigger buildup here maybe then the drop
cool shizzle when it did drop
nice start - looking forward to hearing this finished
glad ure back 
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27-03-2007 08:14 |
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Halph-Price
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Originally posted by Glim
cheers guys, im takin all of that onboard.
i really struggled with getting my vocals to fit in the tune
and i'll be going away with your advice in mind, cheers halph price.
Also the drop drums need to be re-worked, they sound messy and the bass riff needs tweaking and maybe variation on it
pleased with the results as its the first track i made in over half a year
will be doing plenty of reviews in a bit, trust me...
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also it's probably the mic your using, beyond everything else. you can't boost or cut signal that just isn't there cuz your mics not getting it. just need a sure58 at the least. sure57 are cheaper and do about the same, but there's not as durable.
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27-03-2007 09:42 |
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Rudeone
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soundin wicked so far except for the vocals
get a proper mic first
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27-03-2007 12:03 |
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equipped
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diggin the deep synth's and that wee pitch bend,...dam what you usin for a synth Glim?,...heafty ambient sounds,..not feelin the rap over top,...never felt that sorta thing in dnb so just me opinion,..i now your dam good at it though so prop's for another Glim vocal,...eveything els is top notch,...some serious filter jobby's and it all sounds dam originall,..till the drop,..then its back to the norm,..but that intro up to the main drop it some serious poo,..you got a huge sound Glim,..big cheers and sorry for the delay on the review. 
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29-03-2007 06:52 |
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D2o
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29-03-2007 09:23 |
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wreakon
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29-03-2007 12:52 |
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GeeZZ
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fat tune bass line fat l
loose that shit slow break wiv mc'cant rap'
if not
vocals need to be clearer and backed up lay slightly different versionsof same lines over each other and use sterio paning maybe a little reverb to that
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