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Bulls-I Bulls-I is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Surprise' and post your comments here!!!

Yo ppl,
spent a lot of time on this track, pls check it out to the end cause there are some changes, let me know what do to with it!

Grtz Bulls-I

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22-03-2007 19:05
BattleDrone BattleDrone is a male
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I don't feel the intro, there are some samples being played, but there seems to be no real connection between them.
Don't do panning on the snaredrum, it sounds bad.
The bit of voice you play from 50" on are not fun to hear and get on my nerves real fast.
The track doesn't sound as a whole, it seems like you made the first part, then made some break with one shots and made a second part that sounds different. I know the feeling Big Grin you should make a track that has a more connected sound I think, it should tell a story.
But there are some positive points too.... you are doing really well, you have improved allready on a lot of aspects of producing. Keep going.

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22-03-2007 20:04 Homepage of BattleDrone
Halph-Price Halph-Price is a male
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you can pan the samples to help split them if you want. or do the ping pong delays on them.

that lead bass line sucks all alone there, and it sounds cheese. distort more. flange it first, help give it a nicer warmth. delay it slightly. bring it up int he mix a bit more.

oh like the pig sound after the seoncd fart.

and the bassline that fallows such a nice sound.

layer in some nice big one hit drum smaples on the kicka dn snare. or compress the ones you got if you havn't. nice and sharp compression. slow attack and fast release.

too bad you don't have much else.

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This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by Halph-Price: 23-03-2007 01:40.
23-03-2007 01:40 Homepage of Halph-Price
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intro is a trip,..sounded heafty on me speaker's,..nice one on the mad yippy pitched vocal Evil ,..has a good rythm to it,..load's of energy,..maybe slap some delay's on it with a big pitch bend,..would sound heafty i think,..anyway just one me ideas,..diggin this allot,...cheers Bulls-I.

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24-03-2007 06:09
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your intro is a lot louder than when the beats drop. they feel very tinny and weak too, theres too much panning also (taste)

that cartoonish sample is sticking out not in a good way

your main drums need a hell lot more beef, layer em

not really feeling the bass, more subs!

funny little tune.

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25-03-2007 13:23 Homepage of cynik
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