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intricate
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Please check out my new track 'flyin in thoughts' and post your comments here!!!
Firstly i've named it "sundawn vip" from my last tune , remember 
i guess that Flyin In Thoughts is a better name , or suggest 1 plz
Anyways it's a clip any feedback is welcome
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22-03-2007 18:34 |
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Halph-Price 
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song title: song with horns and atmospheric pads! SHAP for short!
... other than it's a song. didn't over do the hook sample the vocal bits. so nice. you're one up on most. you coulda kept going with the song longer, if you found another elemnt to bring in at the point the song ends. i thought it was going to come back after it ended.
thne you can go back to the regular, and have a totally chillaxing dnb trax.
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23-03-2007 01:36 |
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intricate
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well it's a clip m8
going to work on that one , make it a cooldown a 2nd drop and add some crisps
Just layed out the main theme , wanted to check how is it going so far
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23-03-2007 08:08 |
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cynik
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sounds feel somewhat reused, the sax Ive heard a quadrillion times
nice crafting, chill vibes.
waiting for the drop but it never happens, feels like a big intro
dunno, make it drop and we can talk of dnb
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25-03-2007 13:26 |
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intricate
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i can't agree that there is no drop
lol its so obvious ...
I agree that those horns are used couple of times , even i used them in the 1st choon , but thats why its sort of a Part 2 tune
Anyways , thx for ur feedback cynik
Need more of your sensible criticism ppl, go for it !
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25-03-2007 19:31 |
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cynik
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ahh it does drop but not as I hoped for 
anyways its just my tiny say on your work, it is yours and I dont want to slag it, you can take my opinnion and you can absolutely ignore it its up to you 
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