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Surora23 
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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http://www.sendspace.com/file/8xugqe
This is a lil something that no one wants.. so have at it guys!
its something i kinda came up with when i had a lot of off time and was doing more drugs than i shouldve lol...too much weed, shrooms and pills is bad for you...im pretty happy with it, its kind of a dark, triipy vibed out roller... more for the feeling than teh dancefloor vibe... enjoy i relaly like this one...
and remember... dont do drugs kids! 
unless yo know hwat youre doing...
-surora
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22-03-2007 01:50 |
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SARIN
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Registration Date: 08-10-2004
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Fookin FAT bass, but to be honest those bleeps...to trancy for me.
Mixdown could be even louder, but if you want to do that, I think you will have to turn the sub down a notch....(my neighbours already complained!!!)
Very dark vocal, fits the tune very well.
Break you used is cool, is covering most frequencies, maybe another kick layered would be good.
What I am missing most is a heavy lead or something like that, I feel that the trancy bleeps are not enough to carry the tune.
And this all is not meant negative, but rather a different look your tune.
Cheers,
S@R!n
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22-03-2007 06:38 |
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Halph-Price
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drum machine sounding drums, sparse techno. nice deep base.
you could have ripped up that sample a bit. chopped it a little to make it go in time to the music at some spots. but i guess purastic way is to leave it to the beat of the film. wouldn't be so bad if it was a short clip, but once you get a whole paragraph it has it's own sort of rhythm.
yea, so another of your trancy dance songs. in the second half you could ahve introduced another insturment or atmosphere. not only to help build but help give it some variation. it's repitiious a bit too much. the vocals help chop that, but that's one fo the only contrasting elements in this song.
if this is yuo on drugs, what were you doing? vallium or opium. maybe find some LSD or shrooms. or a flanger or phaser. 
whatever, just saying if i were dancing to this i'd be bored in by the second tiemy uo did the neo clip.
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22-03-2007 08:08 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
Registration Date: 05-07-2004
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Originally posted by Halph-Price
drum machine sounding drums, sparse techno. nice deep base.
you could have ripped up that sample a bit. chopped it a little to make it go in time to the music at some spots. but i guess purastic way is to leave it to the beat of the film. wouldn't be so bad if it was a short clip, but once you get a whole paragraph it has it's own sort of rhythm.
yea, so another of your trancy dance songs. in the second half you could ahve introduced another insturment or atmosphere. not only to help build but help give it some variation. it's repitiious a bit too much. the vocals help chop that, but that's one fo the only contrasting elements in this song.
if this is yuo on drugs, what were you doing? vallium or opium. maybe find some LSD or shrooms. or a flanger or phaser.
whatever, just saying if i were dancing to this i'd be bored in by the second tiemy uo did the neo clip. |
yea man... shrooms and weed... lots of fun... i jsut wanted to make somethign that was just as progressive as trance... and this was my take :-p
i agree that it could need more, but that was also the intention... kind of a filler (im on drugs) kinda tune...i was havin a blast when i wrote it...
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22-03-2007 16:56 |
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rodi
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Registration Date: 25-03-2007
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yea it does sound like u've told
trance + mushrooms + dark vibes of ur brain
Im not into this kinda style , i just can tell that sample i guess some of the commentators named as "bleeps" , for me they are just very high notes of some strings
Anyways they suit the intro very well , but the whole drug theme i guess can't be held on this sample
I suggest u adding some trippy FX's , or singlehit synths ...
I think if it's a drug related tune u should make it mo TRIPPY man
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25-03-2007 20:08 |
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rodi
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oh , and another thing , upload the tune to the site , it's more easy to check it out
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