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goonybag 
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Crank It' and post your comments here!!!
I feel the intro may be a little long, I am in the process of recording vocals for this and of coarse, I was after your thoughts. This track nearly makes me breakout the robot at the end breakdown! hope you enjoy.
goonybag
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17-03-2007 03:35 |
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Bulls-I
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Yo man,
intro sounds are pretty standard, twist and turn a bit so people don't recognize the sounds immediately, with drums falling in, it sounds really nice, got my head moving, pretty strange when you start speeding it up, break around 1.30 isn't nice, too simple like, drop is nice, really like the quality of your snare, you need to work on your EQ-ing cause some sounds like breakdown bass sounds, are of too high volume, high synths coming in after vocal sounds pretty professional, make me think of pendulum a bit, breakdown bass again too loud, first part is pretty low, but after vocals this really is nice, maybe work on that part and leave first part out?
gRTZ Bulls-I
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18-03-2007 10:37 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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the choppy string intro reminds me of the diesolboy track invid.it sounds good but the end of the note seems a lil clicky.i dont know if its a sample or a midi note ,but if its a sample check the end of the note for clicks.the end of the sample should be faded to prevent this.or maybe its the notes over lapping.something is clicking.i like the drum kit it sits well.the bpm speed up is not quite smooth.it seems to speed up then level off and speed up more.check the bpm to make sure its a smooth fade from 150-175(im guessing). i dont like the dudes talking.take them out and keep the chick singing.the bass at 210 is pretty sweet.put a filter on it to cut everything below 55-60hz out.this will bring up the rest of the surrounding beat without killing your synth.the hi part at 230 is nice keep that bro. i like the breakdown.the main bassline really works for it at 5mins.i really like the way it grinds.sounds pretty good man keep it up .the direction is very refreshing.
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01-04-2007 06:34 |
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Halph-Price
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what a slow song. i listened to it all.
ok so you got a song structre down and some sounds that sound like SEGA.the delayed nylon string sounding synth, it's the worset cheeze. if you replaced that with something else, or learned to eq a bit. maybe run a flange or verb on it.
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