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dj milkman 
dnb junkie
Registration Date: 01-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'I will be master' and post your comments here!!!
Done this earlier just wud like some feed bak if possible?
my mate told me 2 put a police siren in somewhere and this is basically wat i have come up with.
Aint finished yet need a bit work.
Cheers
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www.myspace.com/djmilkmanftrozey
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16-03-2007 19:35 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Aii
Nice on, like the intro, maybe layer one more synt on it, cause it is a littl eto empty and that makes the beats zo alone standing, so een extra synt, pad on top could doe the shit. Mayeb turn your snaer a littl elouder and some rolling elements like hihats.
But it sound chil and oke to me, just a little empty some places.
Greetz
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ANALOGUE (Tryptech)
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16-03-2007 20:26 |
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thejazz
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Registration Date: 01-03-2007
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i'm gonna be a bit harsh here, but only because i'm trying to be super critical of my own stuff too.
on the intro, like the man says, it's a bit empty. i like snares on their own, but not really feeling these. the vocal sample is alright, not sure it really adds anything. and i wouldn't repeat it straight away, even with dynamic changes - actually i'd keep it more in the background, maybe have a whole group of different samples of people chatting and make it more like ambient talking...
the sound of the keys is a bit bland, but not bad. the chord sequence is ok, doesn't really make sense harmonically but then again isn't horrible.
i quite like the bass line but it's too loud... and maybe needs a more regular bass line to fit with it as well.
at least you got the siren in! good sample, maybe pan it around or have like a doppler effect going on...
well, i didn;t hate it.
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18-03-2007 13:21 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
Registration Date: 08-11-2006
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if you want variation in your shaker thats fine just make shure your not writing melodies with your shaker.the open hat and crashes need to go.your main beat(snr kik clsd hat)sounds great.the synth(rhodes) in the intro is very lonely.maybe some sort of accompanying instrument would help.strings or maybe a arp.there seems to be a timing error at 125.theres a slight lag where it loops.well i like the sub bass( up and down).one of the hits seems a lil to high of a stretch .i like groove man work it and let me hear it again. 
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01-04-2007 07:18 |
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demolitionkid
where's demo?
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ohh yeah fix the timing(the error i spoke of at 125) it seems to be present in the drum beat all over the track when it loops around.
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01-04-2007 07:20 |
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