Please check out my new track 'ostra sized' and post your comments here!!!
yes massive,one ive been workin on for a few hours,not really eqd yet,jus wanted a bit of feedbac,simple dance floor number,any wayy chec it out,peace n love 2 da dnb.be mass,chec myspace,n chec out da earth platoon.
alright man, almost an aphex pad you got going on at the beginning! very ambient. not sure the bass works over the top though. but when the pads cut out and leave the bass, that's really nice.
however the really distorted snare (loads of reverb) goes on a good 4 beats or so too long... <actually maybe not if u do the follwing> and if ur going to use that as a transition into ur main beats (which are fat, btw) i'd do something simple like start off quiet and get louder into it, maybe filter through the transition somehow.
the breaks and bass are raw, can't really think of anything to make them better, got loads of interest in the drums but still flows, the bass cutting through the little stops in the drums is fucking sweet too.
just listening again to ur intro, and thining some dirt on the pads would be nice, they're a bit clean which i think is what made me dislike them going together with the bass, filth them up and i'll make u a gold star.
and, as a minor thing, move the bass through the pads a but with some panning (though my speakers are right next to each other so i can't judge that that well) and a little bit of phaser action?
keep going on this one man, ur putting out tunes which are wicked and i always like listening to them.
This post has been edited 1 time(s), it was last edited by thejazz: 16-03-2007 12:58.
Liking the beggining starts of ambient and then gets a bit rougher till it all come together. only suggestion wud be to drop it a bit quicker as the bulid up is quite long but thats just 2 my taste.
Like the Jazz said ur breaks and beats are good cant really recomend anything to make them beta. i like how it stops and starts during phat mate.
Cud do with an ending but i guess u havent got that far yet.
my favourite bit is definately the drop on this one, ur drums are sounding really crisp on this one. Might be just my thoughts but think the breaks could do with the ghost snares and hats in at 15 and 16 on bar but again its only my opinion. have a fiddle and see what u think. Also add some minibreaks in as well to mix things up a little.
Like the drop but think it could come in a littler earlier. Good atmosphere on the build up but get rid of the klaxon/horn sounding thing.
