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goonybag 
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Registration Date: 12-11-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Projected Emotion' and post your comments here!!!
I have not finished this one yet, Im definitely after that good old drumnbass.be feedback. I can take it, so dish it out! Was thinking of adding some lead synths at the end, let me know what you think!And hammer me hard if you think its shit.
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11-03-2007 05:59 |
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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straight with the lead, and you got some nice effects going, delay and reverb.
straight clown step beat. you don't need to have so many drum hits going for the rolls, small variations work well, it's noticable. specially after the breaks been rolling for 4 or 8 mbars.
good drop. keeps building well. the track seems a bit bright at this part though, the lead has a lot of high end to it, from a mix point of view. but it's filling it in well.
the lead doesn't seem to bright when it isn't pitched down really far. sound better.
the only thing missing is a good hook. a sample or something. or a really good odd sound. you know what i mean, something you'd thik about after. other than that, it's a good dance song.
to be picky the drums sound programed and lack soul, or Groove. some quantising a swing in there would help. if you're using fl, it's simple there's some good MPC swings that are helpful or the hip hop ones.
if not, most programs still have quantising that has swing.
P3ACE
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11-03-2007 21:41 |
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goonybag
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cheers for your review Halph-Price, I really appreciate your input, and agree with what you have said. Good one on picking the programmed drums, I program everything from one hits, and as I grid lock all my hits it does seem to lose that natural groove, I will definitely have a go at adding some "swing" to them. I use cubase sl3, so will have to look at quantizing grooves to my patterns, and also have been searching for a vox sample but have not found what I am after yet.
Thanks again for your valued input, I will definitely be checking out your new track tonight.
this is such a great site!
goony
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12-03-2007 07:28 |
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anf0 D
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not a bad tune.... nice elements.
i think the snare needs work though... sounds plan.
the arrangment is good... might need some work but its sounding good.
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