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tryptech
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Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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bunch of weird samples in the start. try getting something rhythmatic in the start there. to help define a tempo the samples keep going all over, and it would help them. make it seem more chaotic, and yet, more song like still.
there's a distinct lack of bass at 2:40 part. and a bit of clipping also. remaster that.
sound more like a song from zelda than anything there man.
something like the zora frozen, or something. hoenstly.
then it goes back into a big kick and snare. the hit hats don't have much of a high. you could layer in more drums there, some hat's to help thoes smooth hats there.
long and monotonous song. get a sample in there anything.
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11-03-2007 21:48 |
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rstar
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Registration Date: 28-11-2005
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I can see your goin for a U.K. style track with the heavy manipulation of the LFO on that grungy synth...which I like alot. But you do need to push that synth a little more, not in volume, but things like frequencies and compression. The LFO needs better timing.
I also thought that your asking for a little too much from the listener in the down times of the song. There are new elements being incorporated during these down times, which it feels like your trying to create a build. However, these are not elements that contribute to the build effectively, and leaves me lookin at my watch. More of a build...or keep the down times short and sweet.
When that beat kicks I feel it...I know this is something that could possibly sound good on the floor in the future. The bass drum needs some EQing, but if you push the right way...it will work out for you...
Hope to hear more in the future...
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12-03-2007 02:04 |
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tryptech
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Thanls for the reviews guys
I appreciate them
I try to review as much as possible
But im still just a beginner
So dont know always what to say
Greetz
__ ANALOGUE (Tryptech)

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12-03-2007 18:45 |
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Nick ZZ
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The intro is alright. Like the synth. The synth can use a bass layer. The drumz are loud and proud, but the pecussion can come up a tad. You have some wierd samples in there, hmmmm, not sure if they fit perfectly.... Drumz can use more variation. Cheers. Z
__ Nick & Erina Z
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