dj milkman 
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Registration Date: 01-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Cryptical' and post your comments here!!!
Alrite everybody. i have been away 4 ages and its time i came bak. this is my first tune bak and i hope u like it.
I have been away experimenting and learning and i believe that my music is 100X beta now.
This tune needs a bit of work to it but i hope u all like it
Some feedbak wud be great
Cheers
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www.myspace.com/djmilkmanftrozey
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10-03-2007 19:38 |
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tryptech
Tryptech
Registration Date: 16-08-2006
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He there
Jeah youve imporved a lot
like whats going on
your very creative sounds are good
beats are nice, self made good shit
jeah
bass is oke
i cant say many bad things about it, cause youve improved so much, you should keep going on like this.
well done
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10-03-2007 22:40 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Is it just me or is the bassdrum missing?
Otherwise it sounds good!
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11-03-2007 13:23 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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the main break is too quite and weak sounding. its drum and bass. the drums need to be dominat yo.
the echo/verb on them, it makes them seem more "blurred" and less in the front. it's od. yo could layer some nice strong drums over top them, and let that shit be a background sound.
the other sounds come in so much louder then the drums though.
mostly the same through the entire track. so it's not muh on buildup or release. you should try to do that. make a song and try to emulate a song ya like. you'll find that'll help you do the song thing.
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11-03-2007 21:58 |
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Seven Gun
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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AGREED^^
the beats really let this one down (when i heard em come in, i thought they were just a teaser roll)
like those two said.....find a solid kick you like (one shot), and layer that on top of your break this will really help drive your tune.
same with the snare.......find a slightly dirstorting snare you like (there is a good snare pack on the samples section).......and slap that on top.........just EQ em both till you are satisfied that it sounds stompy enough.
also turn up that break.......it sounds nice as a roller behind your beats so crank it up bro.
i like the bassline.......think with more work that could envelope a good tune there.
sampling is ok too.........although could do with summat a bit catchy to get your attention.
take it easy mate 
the tune is ok.....just master it!
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12-03-2007 01:48 |
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dj milkman
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Cheers 4 the input
So i need 2 make my drums louder i dont have a clue why they are so quite 4. it also needs a better a build up and release anything else?
I will post up what i have come up with in the next couple of days.
Thanks
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13-03-2007 12:48 |
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@1$-)
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oi milkman check your private messages.
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13-03-2007 14:42 |
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philbee
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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like the intro alot,cool stuff,when it drops the beatz jus sound weak,need to boost them up alot(imo)got foundations jus need to build on em,peace one love,keep goin,
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14-03-2007 18:22 |
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rez
Wicked Producer
Registration Date: 15-04-2008
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i agree with the other guys, the snare and kicks lack some power. the bass and the intro were pretty nice, funky style . nice effects in the track but in my opinion it gets a little bit too repetetive after listening the first 3 minutes. but the song would have a complete different impact with booming drums 
overall its pretty cool, keep it up
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