thejazz
Producer

Registration Date: 01-03-2007
Posts: 36
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alright there, having a listen now, and i like a lot of the ideas in it.
good use of space - but maybe build it up a bit before putting all those stops in. and i like the bass line, emphasing the two main notes and morphing into them, but, especially because of the fact that the main focus of the track IS the bassline - i don't really like the open sound - for me, it needs to be either cleaner, or much MUCH filthier.
on the cuts it could do with being a teeny-tiny bit cleaner, there's a little bit of overspill in some places (maybe over critical ears, i dunno).
basically, it sounds like a snatch of a really wicked tune that's been extended a bit and had the melody lifted off it.
which is not to say i don't like it - just needs a hook or two.
nice one
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