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GiMP-DJ GiMP-DJ is a male
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Please check out my new track 'The Shining' and post your comments here!!!

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08-03-2007 17:15
thejazz thejazz is a male
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alright there, having a listen now, and i like a lot of the ideas in it.
good use of space - but maybe build it up a bit before putting all those stops in. and i like the bass line, emphasing the two main notes and morphing into them, but, especially because of the fact that the main focus of the track IS the bassline - i don't really like the open sound - for me, it needs to be either cleaner, or much MUCH filthier.

on the cuts it could do with being a teeny-tiny bit cleaner, there's a little bit of overspill in some places (maybe over critical ears, i dunno).

basically, it sounds like a snatch of a really wicked tune that's been extended a bit and had the melody lifted off it.

which is not to say i don't like it - just needs a hook or two.

nice one
08-03-2007 19:49 Homepage of thejazz
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Lol I think it's funny, specially the text haha.
besides the houmoristic text I liked the bassline and melody too, but it wasn't really changing towards the end. A bit boring.
Overall I think it's a good startoff.
08-03-2007 20:00
demolitionkid demolitionkid is a male
where's demo?


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i like the wobble bass intro.it sounds good.the lack of a kik when the beat starts is very off sounding.maybe add a kik and just filter it out with a high pass.the main drums are good and tight .bring them up a touch.for your synths add a hp filter.and cut out everything below 55hz.this will leave room for your kik to breath and will also clear up the synths..the akuma break at the end works for it ;use that in the beginning. keep workin on it! later bro Big Grin
01-04-2007 06:55 Homepage of demolitionkid
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