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shard shard is a male
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Registration Date: 20-11-2003
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http://shard.netdojo.com/ricochet.mp3

feedback much appreciated...especially if it's bad but detailed feedback. this is my first full dnb tune so the elements don't really have any overall feel to it...just kind of things that I tried out and worked.




*edit* oh and out of curiosity...does anyone know why when I click on songs in this forum it opens the save/download dialog box twice?

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20-11-2003 23:15 Homepage of shard
shard shard is a male
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wow it's that bad huh?

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23-11-2003 07:34 Homepage of shard
Surya Surya is a male
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Haven't had time yet, but will review soon mate, no worries, I review EVERY track posted here (normally) Big Grin

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23-11-2003 12:10 Homepage of Surya
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Like the filtered drums in the intro.
Don't really like the sounds for your melodies, too light for drum 'n' bass, and the melodies sound quite random too.
Bassline needs a boost, especially the sub.
Souds like there's quite some compression on the drums (quite noticable on the snare and hats), and I don't like hearable compression.
Structure is quite good accually, enuf change and stuff.
But mastering needs a LOT of work.

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26-11-2003 15:44 Homepage of Surya
shard shard is a male
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thanks you were right on it with what I thought needed work too.

haha found out that pendulum - tonite has a similar filter intro cept theirs is good. Cry

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26-11-2003 22:30 Homepage of shard
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