 wrm - Handful of air |
wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Handful of air' and post your comments here!!!
This is what came into my mind few days ago, its just a quickly made. Just wanna know whether u dig it or not. Check it out and post some replies pliz. Cheers
This track has been deleted because a new version is available
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23-02-2007 09:28 |
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Nick ZZ 
Master Producer
Registration Date: 29-05-2005
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WRITING / ARRANGEMENT : 9/10
The intro is alright, but the pad is not so hot (too common). The bassline is nice! More distortion to the bass please! Needs more drum variation(s).
PRODUCTION QUALITY : 6/10
The sounds are EQ'd alright, maybe work more on limiting and compression as well as sound selection. Some of the sounds can come up a tad.
ENJOYMENT : 6/10
Not feeling anything special inside right now. Sorry. 
OVERALL RATING : 6/10
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23-02-2007 10:47 |
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Lemon
Tourist
Registration Date: 21-02-2007
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It's very easy, simple, but I dig the tune, very relaxing. The synth is a bit too loud I think. But's a really chill tune.
Needs a lot of work though. Sry, can't tell you much about the technic and quality, I'm more of a atmospheer taster.
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23-02-2007 10:50 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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In the part after the intro the bass has some strange high notes that sound off a bit.
After the drop the track is less impressive as before. I would have expected some new elements in the second part, maybe some vocals or some tremolo melodic thingy or some melodic stabs with some dub style sound effects on them...
Track is far from bad though.
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23-02-2007 13:37 |
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Seven Gun
dotbee 4eva
Registration Date: 16-01-2007
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nice idea. not outstandingly original but its got an angle that cool.
turn that amosphere up and clean that bass a tiny bit.
one or two more samples woudnt hurt. vocal and a subtle melodie.
like the bass riff, simple and sweet (its the way to go sometimes).
beat sequencing is ok too, although coud do with a bit more crispiness.
more work and you could have yourself a strong tune there.
noy bad not bad!!! 
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23-02-2007 15:55 |
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wrm
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thx for replies guys, I wil consider some of advice forshure.
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23-02-2007 16:14 |
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Teal
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Registration Date: 20-02-2007
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I like the track but think that its a bit thin maybe you can place the drop someware more in the beginning and after the drop another synth or sample whith some dist or something like that.
it should put in a little more variaty and maybe a bit more heavy,
but that is youre choice and where you want to go whith this track.
maybe a little, more happy tune in contrast whith the deep bassline.
I would give that a try you never now.
you got a good basis to strart from but it needs more work an sound
misses a bit variaty.
you will get there. cheers
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25-02-2007 15:44 |
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