When the bassdrum kicks in it is too loud. Melody is beautyfull and everything fits together very well, but it tends to get a bit boring. You need to add some more variation to the melody, bassline, drums... add some FX, yadda yadda yadda. You know the drill.
I would also try to change the intro so that the melody is not played right away (keeping the best for later).
Has potential... let it enfold.
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Love the melody, shame of the bass though.
Such nice dramatically played melody, but too bad that it doesn't change at all towards the end.
The futuristic sounds don't fit my ears.
When I heard the intro I was like "damn, I wanne hear the rest of the track" but there never came something smashing that realy blew me away.
Their is a very nice building up intro so please take the rest oif the tune to the trashcan and make my speakers bounce the next time, cuz I think you can.
The most important thing to do is get rid of the intro melody and do a rhytm switch (I guess there's a proper name for it)
melodic build up on this one is definately my favourite part. Think the drums need a bit of work - sub is too powerful and snares lack a bit of punch as well. Main bassline needs a big drop before it comes in to build some suspense, dont bring in the sub or synths when the drums first come in. Bassline is pretty nice when it gets going though, needs some more overdrive and compression on it to bring out the roughness a bit.
