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Nick ZZ 
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Narcissistic Culture- By: Nick and Erina Z
Size:13.5MB/320K (DARK-STEP/PUNK-STEP)
(THIS IS EDIT 6)If the streamer gets choppy, stop it for a few seconds, this means it's time for a computer upgrade.
http://www.mv2media.com/process_stream.php?id=28341
Erina Z did the Melody work (love you Erina Z); Zed my neighbor in the apartment above us did the yelling; I stepped to the mic and screamed my lungs out with him! It's a bit different for us, hope you enjoy it the same or more.
LYRIC-
Narcissistic Culture,
Wake the fuck,
Wake the fuck up,
Your mind,
Your eyes,
Your heart,
Come to now.
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This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by Nick ZZ: 25-02-2007 07:42.
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19-02-2007 10:31 |
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BattleDrone
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Ace job mister ZZ (did you look that up in French?)
This thingy sounds polished and raw at the same time making it awesome. At the same time it sounds rocking and layed back. The vocals fit in great. Could be an album track for the Prodigy if you don't see that remark as an insult 
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When the main synth popped in I got goose bumps all over 
The drop/redrop is well done.
Gave you maximum score.
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19-02-2007 11:58 |
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Muad'Dib
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Wow, nice start. Good creepy sounds. The bass has much treble on it, it's maybe too noisy. The drum loop is amazing, industrial and hard. Good balance and mix.
The start is, as I said, nice. The bass might use a little pushup at its mids (I presume 700-1400 Hz). If you add frequencies there, try using a compressor to glide the sound.
Maybe too big build up (the first one), and too short beginning part. Try fixing that, or add some hihat pattern in the build up.
The yelling by your friend is nicely put, can I have the samples please?
You can add some more drums to the drum loop to fill it. It sounds a bit empty this way.
Not much variations in the tune, after some time it becomes a little boring. An addon of drums for the drum loop might help significantly.
Wow, that was a nice shock, at 3:50. In this second part I think that you should add those drum additions. And maybe make your friend yell something new, that would be nice for this part.
Overall, an ok track 
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19-02-2007 13:33 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by BattleDrone
Ace job mister ZZ (did you look that up in French?)
This thingy sounds polished and raw at the same time making it awesome. At the same time it sounds rocking and layed back. The vocals fit in great. Could be an album track for the Prodigy if you don't see that remark as an insult
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When the main synth popped in I got goose bumps all over
The drop/redrop is well done.
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Thanks m8! We are going to do one more edit and make a few subtle changes. Glad you dig it. Z
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21-02-2007 11:45 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by Muad'Dib
Wow, nice start. Good creepy sounds. The bass has much treble on it, it's maybe too noisy. The drum loop is amazing, industrial and hard. Good balance and mix.
The start is, as I said, nice. The bass might use a little pushup at its mids (I presume 700-1400 Hz). If you add frequencies there, try using a compressor to glide the sound.
Maybe too big build up (the first one), and too short beginning part. Try fixing that, or add some hihat pattern in the build up.
The yelling by your friend is nicely put, can I have the samples please?
You can add some more drums to the drum loop to fill it. It sounds a bit empty this way.
Not much variations in the tune, after some time it becomes a little boring. An addon of drums for the drum loop might help significantly.
Wow, that was a nice shock, at 3:50. In this second part I think that you should add those drum additions. And maybe make your friend yell something new, that would be nice for this part.
Overall, an ok track
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Thanks for the review and comments, we will do another edit to the bass sounds and see if we can sort that out. He yelled the first sample and the rest is all me!!!!
We would be happy to share all of the samples, so long as you do a remix and the song title is not changed. We are going to give the samples out and if it goes well we can have the label release the tracks that do well... Write me an e-mail please. Z
nick_and_erina@yahoo.com
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21-02-2007 11:51 |
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Muad'Dib
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Very well, check thy email!
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21-02-2007 21:03 |
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Nick ZZ
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23-02-2007 10:14 |
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The Nitrous
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24-02-2007 07:13 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by The Nitrous
Really like this 1 !
Very good tunage. That kick stab is heavy and intense.
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Thanks, this is edit 3; we just finished (edit 6)
We will update the files tonight!
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25-02-2007 06:43 |
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cynik
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detailed intro which seems to become your trademark
strange how the beats dropped, not saying its bad, but its different
some more rolling with ghost hits would be nice. the highats are wrong imo. how about some killer hats/crash parts. bass could be cleaned up a bit. lots of scrathes and pops
vocals are too loud, or too much stereo
good tune overall. more rolling of the drums would make this huge
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25-02-2007 14:20 |
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Nick ZZ
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Originally posted by cynik
detailed intro which seems to become your trademark
strange how the beats dropped, not saying its bad, but its different
some more rolling with ghost hits would be nice. the highats are wrong imo. how about some killer hats/crash parts. bass could be cleaned up a bit. lots of scrathes and pops
vocals are too loud, or too much stereo
good tune overall. more rolling of the drums would make this huge |
The vocals are loud! 
Thanks for the feedback M8*! Z
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25-02-2007 23:18 |
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