 Philthy - She Loves the Cock - BASSment Porn RMX |
Philthy McNasty 
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Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Please check out my new track 'She Loves the Cock - BASSment Porn RMX' and post your comments here!!!
A remix of a track I did when I first started making tunes. Some of you might remember it, but probably not. Structure isnt set, wanted to get feedback on what parts I should keep, which i shouldnt, what I should change, yadayadayada
This track has been deleted on the producer's request
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19-02-2007 07:04 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Overall it's ok, but I don't hear a clear structure and the drums sound messy from time to time. Drop the bassdrum stutter as it tends to get boring or maybe use it every 4th/8th bar or something. Some reese-style sounds are too high in pitch to have a major impact. The track could use some more deep bass sounds/subs, but I'm on headphones here, so I could be missing somewhat of it.
The idea of using a porn sample underneath a dirty 'n dark tune is not really new 
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19-02-2007 12:16 |
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Muad'Dib
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Wow, interesting samples at the beginning. You can rearrange so they don't sound a little boring, as it is the same sample repeating.
The drum loop is good, the panning hihats is good too. The quality of the sound is little dull, it's like samples from a low quality source used here. Try enhancing the high freqs of the samples, might give some live to them.
The part that begins at 02:00 is good, really nicely drummed, the bass is good. The sounds in the background are little quiet, try adding some to them (the synths). Some vocals are too loud (like the chick yelling) but they are nicely arranged
And again, the sound quality of the samples (?) is bad... the tune sounds it's like 64kbps mp3 file, of encoded 128kbps of the original version
Try fixing that. Some samples are loud enough, some are little too loud, and some (like the ghost snares) are too quiet, makes them difficult to be heard.
The arrangement is ok, but you wouldn't win prizes with it
Keep it up 
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19-02-2007 13:26 |
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tryptech
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Joo
Long time, notime
SO jeah I remember that song wasnt very keen on it those days, and i stille dont like it, not my taste, ti dont really like the drums, theyb etoo much high end, but could be my headphones, cause they suck a lot The idea was rather funny, so that porn shit Jeah the sample are little bit low quality but that doesntbotter in this tune I just dont like tehe constaly chopping uo of the breaks; The breaks are oke but I rather like less changing. Just taste.
Equalizing is good, structure is a littl ebit messy,
I think its especially the equalizing that has improved a lot
jehhehe
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19-02-2007 14:38 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Right on I hear what you guys are saying. But I heard the porn sample "You want me to bouce it" So I had to make a more bobbline track with it. I think I may feature just that sample and remake it. I really dig the ending with the stop and go edits. Sound will be worked out, not really sure. Definetly gonna drop the You love the cock sample. Yeah and about the sample, they are pretty low fi. The porn sample is and oldie (80s) for shure.
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19-02-2007 16:54 |
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optikal_assassin
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yeah, others might be right, the br-br-br-br drum chop was kinda nerving after a while. the chopping in general wasn't what bothered me, it was just kinda the quick stutter every bar that got me. maybe just not use it soo much. im not too crazy about the chick moaning tho, especially soo much. some cleaning up of the sample would work too, the love the cock vocal. sounds like you put some ass in that break from 2:38 on. i like it better that way. yeah, as you said structure needs some work, ideas seem kinda scattered like you wer ejust kinda testing out some ideas, but yeah, i guess you did say that. bass don't too bad, sound slike you got some more room to play with bass tho, so don't be shy man. you got alot of ideas but it's hard to tell exactly what you should keep and whatnot to. i think planting some structure in the track first would help me get a better feel for what don't sound right and what does. it's got potential tho, just keep workin' in. 
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19-02-2007 19:36 |
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