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wrm
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Please check out my new track 'Almost there' and post your comments here!!!

Another chillout track, its not quite finished, I fell that something is missing there, just gimme some time to figure it out...

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Rudeone
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nice so far but still sounds pretty empty. i like the drums but also could need some fillin elements. bass is a bit plain and the buildup and progression might need work to

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yea i agree with the plain bass ...
But the whole idea and those atmo lines are wicked m8 , if u'll work on it it might sound right !
Btw use more "beat trashings" variety makes the listener more interested in ur tune , and i have just noticed that the the cooldown drops too sudden , like its doesn't sound proper , i always thought that after this second comes the real drop , but it was the real drop , thats the minus , + the beat u use after this drop is wrong , first of all its too silent , and those kicks u use are wrong and dont use them too much in the beat(like many many times in 1 pattern) , make it simple man use more simple , random beats but make them sound abit diffrent from the others and with of "trashings"

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