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Philthy McNasty 
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Please check out my new track 'The Muthafukkin Real' and post your comments here!!!
Been workin on this for a long time. Some of the vocal its need work, but I am just now learnin time strechin certain parts, and what not. Just wanted to get some feedback on what I have done, and some ideas of what u guys think I should do. Say anything I can take it, but I would appreciate any feedback, because this will be the first tune I will submit to a label, so I am gonna work my ass of to get it right. RespeKt!
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07-02-2007 18:19 |
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philbee
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yes,yes,yes,that is some off da hook nasty shizzle my friend,whatever youve bin takin,i dont want any!!!!seriously bruv is tuff tuff tuff,the bassline is rinsin,needs more drummige(imo)i can see its only a couple of minutes long so i guess it aint finished,its a stormer m8 
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07-02-2007 19:20 |
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BattleDrone
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Good stuff, great tension building. nice drums. Looking forward for the future of this track. Intro could use a little fx&stabs&stuff as it takes about 90 seconds.
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07-02-2007 20:20 |
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Rudeone
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nice intro but the drums suck and the mainparts needs more bass imho
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07-02-2007 22:13 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by Rudeone
nice intro but the drums suck and the mainparts needs more bass imho |
Just curious why u think they suck. is it because of the live feel to em, or just they dont fit. And more bass do u mean, it needs a boost, or more changeups, and what not.
@philbee and battle....thanks
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07-02-2007 22:23 |
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Rudeone
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Originally posted by Rudeone
nice intro but the drums suck and the mainparts needs more bass imho |
Just curious why u think they suck. is it because of the live feel to em, or just they dont fit. And more bass do u mean, it needs a boost, or more changeups, and what not.
@philbee and battle....thanks |
just need some adjustment on the mix i think. snare doesnt come through that good. sounds a bit muddy and the wide rides are a bit disturbing.
only got shitty headphones here but i think it could need a bass boost. but it would be even better if you just turn down the drums 
yo its sick, just the mix needs some work 
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07-02-2007 22:45 |
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Philthy McNasty
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Originally posted by Rudeone
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Originally posted by Rudeone
nice intro but the drums suck and the mainparts needs more bass imho |
Just curious why u think they suck. is it because of the live feel to em, or just they dont fit. And more bass do u mean, it needs a boost, or more changeups, and what not.
@philbee and battle....thanks |
just need some adjustment on the mix i think. snare doesnt come through that good. sounds a bit muddy and the wide rides are a bit disturbing.
only got shitty headphones here but i think it could need a bass boost. but it would be even better if you just turn down the drums
yo its sick, just the mix needs some work
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Nah I hear what ur talking about now. I just hooked my headphones up and it sounds like they are phasing or something. But if u listen on reg speakers it doesnt come through that much. I am gonna have to check that out. Thanks for being honest tho, I appreciate it. Cause I would rather u tell me it sucks, then them (techorganic rec) RespeKt!
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07-02-2007 22:56 |
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optikal_assassin
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once i seen that title in the forums, the first thing i thought was eazy-e and mc ren. im a huge fan of old rap man, which i dont hear much of anymore in drum n bass tunes so it was cool to see how you cut that shit into the mix. i think you killed the vocals tho with that time stretching unless that stuttering was what you were gunning for. i mean it's actually kinda cool, but if you were wanting smooth vocals i'd rework that shit. drums are coming in kinda weak, like you were running everything through a stereo enhancer and sounds like a bit of flanger i nthere too, but correct me if im wrong. maybe put some more punch on ya kicks, snares sound a little thin, but snappy so maybe warm them up a bit too, i dunno for sure if that would work wonders. gotta back rudeone up on the bass bit, i think for a track this heavy duty, you could throw in some more sub bass. not really what more to say tho since i only got like 2:08 to work with. anything else i could help or suggest man, feel free to hit me up! 
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08-02-2007 03:30 |
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equipped
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big heafty soundin chunk of a synth at intro,..allway's diggin big heafty chunky soundin synth's,..so drawed me right in on that one,..beuty drop,..soundin a bit like some the all mighty mad ass Cynik edit's on them break's,..nice work,..got em absolutly rippin in the best of way's,..bass stab's carry well,..no doubt a heafty track Philthy,..enjoyed it,..cheers.
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08-02-2007 03:46 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Your sound and idea is very cool... but the drums don't really cut through the mix at all.
You need to re EQ/ compress etc. to get those drums to come through louder and clearer.
I also think those hats in the intro are a bit too loud.
Idea for the track is solid though.
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08-02-2007 05:01 |
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anf0 D
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the drums are cool they just need to be cleaned up... that sound a bit harsh at the moment. the intro was cool and the chopping on the vocal was cool. keep workin it
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08-02-2007 09:49 |
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Philthy McNasty
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08-02-2007 16:30 |
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cynik
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cool intro, vocal is not heard enough, I'd crank it up
it goes on a bit long tho, putting weight on the drop
drops, kick is very non existant, the whole mix is very muddy like its clipping and hard limited
not bad ideas but the drums are barely heard through the mess
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