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philbee 
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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Please check out my new track 'sleeptalk' and post your comments here!!!
yes,yes,and big up,something i been workin on for a day,as usual jus wanna get some feed bac from da massive,new computer seems to b workin alot better now(it is doin what i tell it!!)any way give us a listen and tell me what yah think,peace to da dnb.be mass ranks,peace
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06-02-2007 10:41 |
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Airfull
Sexy Lady
Registration Date: 09-11-2002
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your intro is very good, ur using some nice elements!
then your beat is rather boring
ur drop is ok, but I don't feel the power a drop needs!
and where is ur end?
greetz B
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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06-02-2007 15:27 |
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Philthy McNasty
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Cool atmo intro, one thing tho, the rhythm you have going in the intro is not the rhythm you have once the break comes in, it throws it off a bit. One thing I have noticed about your tracs, you need to add another layer to your 2stepish breaks once the bass comes in to give it a diff feel, if you know what I mean. And then add another once the Main drop comes in. Now, then the drop at 2:08 something just doesnt sound right, maybe its how u pitched up the bline, or the break and hats arent in tune. Something just isnt right. I like the head bobbin feel to it, just needs to be cleaned up. respeKt!
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06-02-2007 17:18 |
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philbee
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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yeah i need to add an xtra element to the beats,it is soundin a bit flat ive been workin on it some more and its soundin allot better,need to find a bit of power when it drops any ideas???????? 
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07-02-2007 19:00 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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The bass isn't really sticking out in the mix, it kinda drowns in the background FX. Bass drum has too much growl and not enough kick. Drums need touching up and variation. The intro sound is cool but tends to get boring after a while and it blurs the mix (eqing?).
Track needs some more elements to capture one's attention.
Nice atmosphere tough.
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07-02-2007 20:26 |
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anf0 D
CXNT
Registration Date: 31-03-2005
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the elements are nice... but it takes 2mins for the bass to drop
and the drums get a bit boring... the synth thing is cool, and i like the sounds for the drums, could probably add some ghost snare action and add some different patterns.
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08-02-2007 09:58 |
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