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hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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Please check out my new track 'Deploy Sterilizers' and post your comments here!!!

Not quite finished, thought I'd get some input.

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06-02-2007 02:56 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
anf0 D anf0 D is a male
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oooo nice ambience n sfx.... the synth that is pitching up doesnt sound the cooolest. that reece is cool. drop is HEAVY! really distorted though... needs to be cleaned up... the drums are sik, but it all needs cleaning. sounds fukn bad ass though.
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06-02-2007 03:21 Homepage of anf0 D
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oooowkeej!

ur beat is ok! not OK, but ok! (well at least in the beginning)

but your bass during allmost the whole track is way to disturbed i think
u started well, nice intro, good chosen vocals, but @ 1,48 you're loosing it!
the pieces in between are super though!

I really don't like that smashing sound! it's not hard it's just agressive!
did u girlfriend cheated on you?
there were u use the smaching sound with the 'uuhn' are still ok, but for the rest, sorry! not good

try to stick more unity in ur tracks!(is this correct?)

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06-02-2007 15:49
Greyone Greyone is a male
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Originally posted by Airfull

did u girlfriend cheated on you?


haha Big Grin good one

same as anfo , realy cool track , just mixdown isues , snare issues and bass issues , sounds like u overdrived the fruity blood overdrive (if you use fl ) and maybe with wrong compression.

but realy you got nice ideas and potential.

eq and compression , just fix that in your next songs
06-02-2007 19:15
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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quote:
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quote:
Originally posted by Airfull

did u girlfriend cheated on you?


haha Big Grin good one

same as anfo , realy cool track , just mixdown isues , snare issues and bass issues , sounds like u overdrived the fruity blood overdrive (if you use fl ) and maybe with wrong compression.

but realy you got nice ideas and potential.

eq and compression , just fix that in your next songs


No fruity loops, I run Cubase SL 1.0.6 Huh on a Mac.

I am having massive anxiety as I need to have surgery on Friday, and was trying to finish this song as fast as possible. I am going to try to fix this B4 Fri.

Thanks all for the feedback... I'll go in and see if I cant clean up some of that distorted mess. If not there is always the next song LOL!!!

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06-02-2007 20:32 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
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Good luck with your surgery !!!!!!

Hug

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09-02-2007 01:08
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hang in there bro! Shocked

review later

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09-02-2007 01:17 Homepage of cynik
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Good luck with your surgery !!!!!!

Hug


Thank you very much!! I'll be back online hopefully in approx 2 weeks.

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09-02-2007 01:27 Homepage of hardplnsdrftr
hardplnsdrftr hardplnsdrftr is a male
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quote:
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hang in there bro! Shocked

review later


Thanks!!

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ok, let us know if everything went well and all that


cheerz!

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09-02-2007 10:24
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Oh back to the evil days. This track is sic. I like it a lot. However:

The breakdown intro is weak. It comes in with just a fade. I'm sure you could do much better.


That "huh" sample you have later in the track could be introduced before the breakdown and then some cutting or some shit. I dunno it's your song but a more powerful segwey into the breakdown would be awesome. Also I would suggest bringing back that ambient stuff and the knife sharpening sound or what ever that was in the beginning. Continuity is a great thing and although this track is really brutal I'd still classify it as a roller and along those lines seemlessness is clutch.

Still I really like the groove you've created. The drums are great.

If you were not thinking of this as a roller then cut it up much much more. Some more of those stalls you have could help. Get crazy with it.

All in all I’d play it as it sits
09-02-2007 16:43
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