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hardplnsdrftr 
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Please check out my new track 'Deploy Sterilizers' and post your comments here!!!
Not quite finished, thought I'd get some input.
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"Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
Søren Kierkegaard
http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter
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06-02-2007 02:56 |
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anf0 D
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oooo nice ambience n sfx.... the synth that is pitching up doesnt sound the cooolest. that reece is cool. drop is HEAVY! really distorted though... needs to be cleaned up... the drums are sik, but it all needs cleaning. sounds fukn bad ass though.
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06-02-2007 03:21 |
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Airfull
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oooowkeej!
ur beat is ok! not OK, but ok! (well at least in the beginning)
but your bass during allmost the whole track is way to disturbed i think
u started well, nice intro, good chosen vocals, but @ 1,48 you're loosing it!
the pieces in between are super though!
I really don't like that smashing sound! it's not hard it's just agressive!
did u girlfriend cheated on you?
there were u use the smaching sound with the 'uuhn' are still ok, but for the rest, sorry! not good
try to stick more unity in ur tracks!(is this correct?)
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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06-02-2007 15:49 |
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Greyone
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Originally posted by Airfull
did u girlfriend cheated on you? |
haha 
good one
same as anfo , realy cool track , just mixdown isues , snare issues and bass issues , sounds like u overdrived the fruity blood overdrive (if you use fl ) and maybe with wrong compression.
but realy you got nice ideas and potential.
eq and compression , just fix that in your next songs
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06-02-2007 19:15 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Originally posted by Greyone
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Originally posted by Airfull
did u girlfriend cheated on you? |
haha
good one
same as anfo , realy cool track , just mixdown isues , snare issues and bass issues , sounds like u overdrived the fruity blood overdrive (if you use fl ) and maybe with wrong compression.
but realy you got nice ideas and potential.
eq and compression , just fix that in your next songs |
No fruity loops, I run Cubase SL 1.0.6 
on a Mac.
I am having massive anxiety as I need to have surgery on Friday, and was trying to finish this song as fast as possible. I am going to try to fix this B4 Fri.
Thanks all for the feedback... I'll go in and see if I cant clean up some of that distorted mess. If not there is always the next song LOL!!!
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"Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
Søren Kierkegaard
http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter
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06-02-2007 20:32 |
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Airfull
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Good luck with your surgery !!!!!!
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09-02-2007 01:08 |
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09-02-2007 01:17 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Originally posted by Airfull
Good luck with your surgery !!!!!!
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Thank you very much!! I'll be back online hopefully in approx 2 weeks.
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"Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
Søren Kierkegaard
http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter
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09-02-2007 01:27 |
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hardplnsdrftr
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Originally posted by cynik
hang in there bro! 
review later |
Thanks!!
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"Trouble is the common denominator of living. It is the great equalizer."
Søren Kierkegaard
http://www.myspace.com/hardplainsdrifter
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09-02-2007 01:27 |
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Airfull
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ok, let us know if everything went well and all that
cheerz!
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ONE BULLET? TWO BULLETS? THE THIRT ONE IS THROUGH MY HEAD!
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09-02-2007 10:24 |
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Tetrahydra
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Oh back to the evil days. This track is sic. I like it a lot. However:
The breakdown intro is weak. It comes in with just a fade. I'm sure you could do much better.
That "huh" sample you have later in the track could be introduced before the breakdown and then some cutting or some shit. I dunno it's your song but a more powerful segwey into the breakdown would be awesome. Also I would suggest bringing back that ambient stuff and the knife sharpening sound or what ever that was in the beginning. Continuity is a great thing and although this track is really brutal I'd still classify it as a roller and along those lines seemlessness is clutch.
Still I really like the groove you've created. The drums are great.
If you were not thinking of this as a roller then cut it up much much more. Some more of those stalls you have could help. Get crazy with it.
All in all I’d play it as it sits
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09-02-2007 16:43 |
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