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Rudeone
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Please check out my new track 'Keep on lovin' and post your comments here!!!
somethin i spent the last few days on.
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19-01-2007 09:37 |
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BattleDrone 
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Hey, nice sound man... Drums are rolling fine. Good atmoshpere, everything fits. First buildup is nice, nothing extreme, but it's no heavy dark shit, so that's just right. Vocal fits the track.
The track tends to get boring after a while though. Pllease add a break and a buildup with perhaps some heavier action or some new elements in the second part.
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19-01-2007 19:41 |
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D2o
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20-01-2007 11:38 |
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good tune.
chilled vibe.
needs more edits/fills/fx or something on the intro to keep me interested. the beat seems a little static.
all nicely mixed though.
agree with jimmy. has potential
This post has been edited 2 time(s), it was last edited by utter muppet: 20-01-2007 18:43.
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20-01-2007 18:42 |
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Rudeone
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thx guys, ill see what ill do with it.
you can have the tracks if you want em jimmy 
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21-01-2007 12:48 |
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syneptic
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okay - first of all - this is def not "my style" of dnb (but thats my cup of tea)
intro is clean - like the voice choppage too - good atmosphere
i do not really like the pad that comes in at 1:50 ......
but it works !
then the drop: clean production - the snare sounds very dry.
all in all: very good prodution !
can imagine that people who are into softer dnb really like this tune !
(for me it is a little bit too monotone .... there should be some variations !)
rock weiter alda !
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21-01-2007 14:42 |
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willm
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Registration Date: 29-03-2007
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The vocal choppage is sick and you've got some good musical ideas melody and bessline wise But there are two things that I would say.
I don't want to sound negative but the synths sound really cheap to me, although this is a good tune, the sounds remind me of the menu music for an oldskool computer game. Maybe try and bring in more analogue sounds beside the vocal.
The beat is also really simplistic and repetitive, and the drums sound too clean to me. maybe add other percussive samples to your beats or make a syncopated highhat line.
I'm sorry it sounds like I'm being very harsh, I think this has potential, listen to some of logistics more recent stuff if you haven't already, he's got a similar musical vibe.
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29-03-2007 01:38 |
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Rudeone
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yo thx willm
i heard the computer thingy a lot now. i guess i have to work on my sound design. 
yea and the drums really need more dynamic.. thx for advice.
logistics is my fav atm... 
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