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wrm
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Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Please check out my new track 'Mantrah' and post your comments here!!!
Just a lil experiment, what do ya think about that? Its not finished. The end is just cut off quickly so dont tell me it sucks, i know it sucks 
any tips how to improve the track? cheers for reply
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18-01-2007 16:21 |
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BattleDrone 
2161... the future.
Registration Date: 30-12-2005
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Good track, cool atmosphere, good amen edits (it never wears of does it?). Kinda layed back stuff, which is nice for a change.
The first break sneaks in nicely, but it ends so accidently.
Overall a nice track. Looking forward for the finished version.
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18-01-2007 20:03 |
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dJSkiLlAx
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Registration Date: 19-01-2007
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nice work wrm
this track is good, have good atmosphere,
for my judgement change the beats is low.....
and you track for me is perfect
have good work
bye
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19-01-2007 02:17 |
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Rudeone
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Registration Date: 15-10-2005
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hm i dont really like the drums. sound a bit random. i would also layer another drumloop. the string would do good with another layer and some filter modulation
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19-01-2007 10:01 |
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wrm
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Originally posted by rudeone
hm i dont really like the drums. sound a bit random. i would also layer another drumloop. the string would do good with another layer and some filter modulation |
well there are already 3 drumloops layered in this track, i think its enough for that
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19-01-2007 10:26 |
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Rudeone
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then i'd try to blend em better i can only hear the amen.
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19-01-2007 10:56 |
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dip_registered
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Registration Date: 19-04-2007
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very chill, maybe the sfx could be lower vol, the pad and beat is excellent... heavy chill with a mad bass... awesome...good job - keep that mad bass after the build!!
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I'll edit ya face to sit tight there in the mix
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