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philbee 
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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12-01-2007 17:44 |
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D Juice
Producer
Registration Date: 15-08-2006
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Well,
on the professional tour éh?
shit sounds pretty pro, but a few aspects are not yet as tight as they should be.
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-the rimshots/ghostsnares you have used to make the beat more rollin have a simple lack of high tones, and they could do well on being pitched up a little bit, so they are more equal to the actual snare.
-the track is pretty short, should make a breakdown in the middle and cut off some of the shit [i suggest to create the breakdown at : 3:12]
after the breakdown create a more powerfull buildup [using fast bassdrums, a sound that slowly pitches up, and/or a tone wich you play more and more, to get to the to at the drop.]
that's also what i'd like to see in the first drop. the sound u used and pitched up to show the listener that the drop has arrived, should be longer. more tension build up.
if you dont know very well how to do that, you can read a guide to building tension or something like that, must be plenty of them on the internet.
i dont know how to do it very good either, i'm also just a little producer.
also try listening to other tracks for this. noisia would be an excellent candidate for this. they know how to build tension.
[try: noisia - block control]
well, i hope this helped you out a little bit,
Good Luck
D Juice DNB
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13-01-2007 11:38 |
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BattleDrone
2161... the future.
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Not much to add to D Juice really. The track is pretty ok, you seem to know pretty well how to make DnB, but the track is missing some action. The break should roll more by adding tension to it (the ghosts should stand out more, add hihats, ...) more build-up should be added to the track, it stays at the same point for too long.
Forget the formulas and try something new, you are deffinately beyond the stage where you need to work hard to make it sound just like some famous producer.
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17-01-2007 23:52 |
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dJSkiLlAx
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Registration Date: 19-01-2007
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wowowowow this track is fantastic
compliment philbee
good sound for very good track beats...
again compliment
bye
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19-01-2007 02:20 |
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