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wrm
orchestral/idm/deep/liquid/experi/mental
Registration Date: 13-09-2006
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Dude,
this track is extremely boring. Dont be offended but it is so... there is nothing going on, just one synth riff and beat. YOu have to do something with the beat, the kickdrum and snare drum arent loud enough, so the synth overpowers it. Dunno what to say about it more. I am not likking it that much, try to do more variations with the synth, add some FX and do some serious EQ. cheers
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10-01-2007 18:21 |
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Philthy McNasty 
Florida DnB Masta!
Registration Date: 23-07-2006
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Alright.....in ur first track I checked, it was cool that u started off with a synth, but this causes for a lead in. Track doesnt really call for the synth of the bat. Have some atmo going, and then have it fade in to the synth, and then fade in the bass. Gotta agree with wrm about this needing more elements. When it first drops have the kick break going and bulid on that, then drop slightly and add the hihat. Just ideas. But you definetly have to have some essence to the tune. Not just beats and synth/bass. You have the basis for a track, just build onto it, and definetly add some edits, and what not, if you gonna keep the same riff going. Keep at it! RespeKt!
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11-01-2007 16:54 |
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philbee
Future beats for the streets
Registration Date: 18-10-2006
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yep yep ,cheers for da feedbac,its all taken on board,,only been producing again 4 ,10 months,just gettin my ideas up and runnin,deff need more shit going on, bac to the lab 4 me peace, 
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11-01-2007 17:00 |
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crossie
Tourist
Registration Date: 19-12-2006
Posts: 11
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like the reece line in the intro.the whole tune reminds me of a total science or digital tune lots of old skool stabs,and the beats are really dubby,nice touch.
its a bit repetetive in parts and could prob do with a few more sound fx to break it up a bit.otherwise the levels seem to sit nice in the mix.well made
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12-01-2007 15:16 |
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ez,
I did like this track at the beginning, i thought the intro was atmospheric and worked well. However by the end i was bored, there is little variation, the tunes basically the same from start to finish.
I did like the beat, but the drums were hidden behind the synth.
good basis, but needs some work.
bless
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14-01-2007 13:53 |
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