Please check out my new track 'Whores From The Underground', post your comments here and vote for it!!!
From the slums of Hellgium , greyone created this masterpiece in order from his disturbed mind . The passion of the whores , straight from the underground , where darkness feeds the slaves of the beast...
192 kbs 180bpm
finished track , not finally mastered and some touches should be done.
Good intro, vocals sound top notch, everything fits together.
Not too fond of the bassdrum in the first part.
Build up to first drop is great. Vocals with fat bassdrum underneath are awesome!
Don't like the Blade bloody basement synth at all (but when you start to tweak with the cut-off after the second drop it is fucking brilliant).
Please don't overdo it with the vocals (it's still ok though)
Middle part has a superb buildup (but rather similar to the first one).
Nice & clean ending.
Good stuff, keep it comming!
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damn bad ass track bro. intro was sickness with a whoopin' drop. good vocal choices. as a matter of personal opinion, i disagree with overdoing the vocals. the vocals are playing a big part in keeping me listening in this. breaks are pretty bad ass too. now that synth is straight creepy man. not sure what you used to make it or if its a sampled synth, but it just sounds cool to me. everything sounds pretty solid to me. not sure if you really were wanting negativity out of this review cuz i can't find alot to pick at that isn't stupid. sounds good to me ears ->
Please don't overdo it with the vocals (it's still ok though)
with bassdrum you mean the basskick ? or the whole drum on itself ?
i downpitched it to let it sound diff then the main break.
maybe i'll do some changes on it.
blade bloode basement synth
thats the main synthstabs then that you mean ? How should it sound better in your opinion , i dont realy have an ear for synths .
i must admit i did some weird thing with the synth , i did it wide stereo but in a small room (reverb 2 in fruity) , should i change the octave ? or do some more filteringfx on it lijke the 2nd drop ? or should i take just another synth ?
i agree , i'll take some of the OOh's away :p , maybe i was to horny at that time , dunno...
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Originally posted by optikassassin
[QUOTE]now that synth is straight creepy man. not sure what you used to make it or if its a sampled synth, but it just sounds cool to me.
do you mean the creepy intro synth that comes once and a while in the track ?
well i found this string sampleoneshot i a synthesised it till its creepy enough , without synthesiser , on feeling.
i here the sub isnt convincing ennough , it doesnt hit the 'feeling' frequenties enough , but its hard to manage it without loozing soundquality of the drums (sub eats frequenties)
Not really sure what the title has to do with the track. But I dig it either way. Seems like there is too much hi end though. Pretty fucking creepy. The synth in the background after the drop is throwing it off a lil, but it kinda does the trick. After 3:09 those edits are fuggin great. Im kinda half and half on this. I like some things edits and what not. But the overall tune just isnt doing it for me personally. RespeKt!
Originally posted by greyone
with bassdrum you mean the basskick ? or the whole drum on itself ?
i downpitched it to let it sound diff then the main break.
maybe i'll do some changes on it.
blade bloode basement synth
thats the main synthstabs then that you mean ? How should it sound better in your opinion , i dont realy have an ear for synths .
i must admit i did some weird thing with the synth , i did it wide stereo but in a small room (reverb 2 in fruity) , should i change the octave ? or do some more filteringfx on it lijke the 2nd drop ? or should i take just another synth ?
Yes, I mean the kick, because of the downpitch it loses it's agressiveness which is clearly pressent when the drums go in full.
I heard that synth the first time while watching the first blade movie (basement rave where blood starts to flow from the ceiling at the climax of the track). I tougth it was fucking perfect back then, but the sound does have a history to it now. So it is kinda "burned up" if you know what I mean. Like those synths from Technotronic
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sure the intro starts off great but imo doesnt develop quite that well. the half step beats could be better
looool. not too sure about all the vocals, sounds like a big mess at times. Im not sure what to do to them too tho. very helpful ey! :S
love the beats. bassline is cool too. when it gets going its a greystep mayhem f sure
the synth in the back, dunno what to say, doesnt fit at all
maybe try with some gated pads as instruments for that?
but yeah whoever said reverb, this needs a more dry approach imo
ok, Ill hit u up with more detail later
You just want to be fukt in yo ass, 666 times.
[JK]
To be honest, I don't think the two themes totally fit together.
The women talking in the other language, and the evil devil talk, aren't the same theme.
If ya took out those women sounds, and found some recorded sounds from various monsters, animals, etc., I think that would fit better, as a replacement. You must find and use only the inhuman and forbodeing soundz.
You could even turn human vocals into strange monster sfx if you messed around enough with a granualizer and a wave editor which had very precise pitch-shifting tools.
Yea Drums are real nice on this one, really drill into ur head. The little mini-breaks and half steps are cool.
I agree with Hidden ID this song is a bit of a collage between two different types of sounds - the Monster ones and the Whore ones. Just stick with the monster ones IMO, would give the track a bit of a fuller theme but thats just a minor point.
Intro starts off very cool, but I can do without that Bela Legosi horror organ
, sounds a bit lame IMO.
The slow intro beat is nice. The main break is great, & the drums sound really good. I like the break after the second drop even better, and the drums get a lot more interesting, nice variation. Very nice work.
I think the bass could be beefier.
I think the "meat" of your track, i.e., the drums and main groove of the track work quite well. But for some reason the song lacks cohesion. I'll try to listen to it again tomorrow amd elaborate on what I am trying to say, I'm not feeling all that well at the moment.
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Originally posted by greyone
i have monster tracks enough
, the drums are full stereo , as for all the non bass sounds too lol , glad you noticed it;
i need more samples , i hate synths
thanx fo checkin out
"I need more samples"
Yes, that is exactly what I estimated.
Some people add sounds which "dont exactly fit", because they don't have sounds which "exactly fit", and they try to "make due" with something else.
I got allot of my vocal samples from "breakbeats paradise", and I think that almost all of them are either hard-to-use, or no-good. I can only make proper monster sounds if I have enough time, alone with a mic and good sound-editing softweres, but that takes so long I don't even wanna do it.
this is propa dirt u must live in a cave everything sounds very good samples r superb and theres so much variation never gettin bored explosive drops phhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhaaaaaaaaaaaaatttttttttttttttttttt
thats the main synthstabs then that you mean ? How should it sound better in your opinion , i dont realy have an ear for synths .
well i found this string sampleoneshot i a synthesised it till its creepy enough , without synthesiser , on feeling.
naaaah... 
maybe try with some gated pads as instruments for that?
, sounds a bit lame IMO.
