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DjSlut 
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Registration Date: 27-08-2003
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Please check out my new track 'ZeroOne' and post your comments here!!!
I have been working on this for a while, but the last few days i have hit a brick wall. The tune is not finished but i wanted to get some feedback and suggestions; maybe it wil help give me some inspiration. So i would appreciate any comments.
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15-02-2005 04:17 |
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Surora23
Agressive Melodic Disorder
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cool intro...very cool...love thsoe vocals...drums are wayyyyyyyyyyyy tooo low in the mix...dont like the bass pattern...sounds too mudded in that first drop...bass htis later are cool...like the drop...some of those synths are a lil weird...but cool...agfain the drums are too low in the mix...the driop thugh is nothing that the first lil hit you have in the intro...think about changing that intro to sound more like the main drop...dude this track is ocming along nicely i dontknow waht you mean by a brick wall...add another cool as lil break down and repeat...most dnb is that way anyway...this is cool for now..but iwant to hear the final for sure...good work..looking forward to the new one...
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Rinse it OUT!!!! 
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15-02-2005 04:37 |
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DjSlut
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thanks for the review dude. Ill work one making a new mix i think, and also try to improve those synths, as sometimes they are quite unpredictable.... 
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15-02-2005 16:54 |
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digitalrumble
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Fukkin sweet intro man 
although mabye stretches on abit. Bass is sounding good definatley beef up the drums but I dunno it definatley needs something else mabye fx or a synth or summink? Definatley the makings of a fine tune there though.
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15-02-2005 18:35 |
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Halph-Price
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Registration Date: 22-12-2004
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the coolest quotes. non-stop enrgy track. don't know what more to say.
i guess i am not creative enough.
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09-03-2005 03:58 |
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Halph-Price
Zombie Algorithm
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oh ya, wheres the quote from. the matrix or something?
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09-03-2005 03:59 |
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Dj-Lowprofile
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what program was this made in? i love the intro..sounds awesome...no time to review now...ill post some comments later.
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09-03-2005 05:32 |
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Surya
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Nice Animatrix intro 
Bassline is nice but could use some sub to fill up the low-low end 
Drums: I can hear the hats, but why does the rest drown in the mix?
2.17: nice drop. Volume of the tramen is a bit better. Nice switching between nice themes. Good jump up (dare I call it clownstep? Yes, I do 
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Nice track, about the best I've heard of you till now. The buildup to the dropt takes a bit long though, and the levels need mucho work though...
3/5 for the track
1.5/5 for the levels
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"In dnb you should make people jump not swim"
- Pieter Frenssen 2004
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09-03-2005 15:48 |
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DjSlut
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Thanks for the reviews dudes! Ill work on the tune and let u know when its finished! I apreciate ur effort
Ill try and sort out the levels, but i dont have any monitors so we'll see how it goes... I think i will also cut down the intro and the build up like u guys said...
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VAS
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10-03-2005 00:47 |
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