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M.O.A.B. 
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any feedback or is really appriciated
I think i could probebly do with some tips on structure
edit by thechronic: track removed because of copyright violation
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24-04-2003 16:08 |
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Surya
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Hmmm, something tells me you're using small speakers or headphones to produce. Your bass is too loud again. Had to turn down my bass by 6db to hear something else than that 
Nice dark track, nothing special tho. Good.
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24-04-2003 18:23 |
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thechronic
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Very minimalistic, would fit great on a dnb after party. The weird voice samples and bird song gives a real avant garde feel in it which would go well with some classy labels I think.
What you need to work on is your production quality - it sounds rather unfinished. You need to work on your balance, which is not a lot of work since you're not using a lot of elements at the same time.
The kick is definitely too loud, but that can be fixed with some multi band compression. In general you need to apply more compression, the track is really soft compared to other dnb productions. You've used some single band compression judging the fact the hihats drop in level when the kick comes in, but that is done wrongly - I think the release time is too long perhaps.
The general balance needs some adjusting too, some sounds are a bit too loud (e.g. the sound effect at 4:10 - the cymbals in the end, ...)
The bassline needs some more growl to it, it's veerry subby now. Also the snare would benefit from some variation, try using a different snare or the same one with the top filtered off for the ghost notes.
For the rest the sounds are cool, well chosen 
I really dig the moody chilled atmosphere of the track, just remix it a little and it will be top 
PS Is it called glitch because of the glitch at 2:53?? 
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24-04-2003 22:27 |
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M.O.A.B.
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Registration Date: 22-04-2003
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cheerz,thanks for the comments there really helpful,unfotunatly I lost all my tracks when my computor crashed 
, so i cant sort them out.But when I make another one i'll send it in.
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25-04-2003 01:34 |
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M.O.A.B.
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sorry bout that glitch. i had to cut a bit out, so i could upload it.
is it possible to make a track smaller by changing the bit rate?
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25-04-2003 01:41 |
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thechronic
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Sorry to hear you lost everything 
bummer...
hope this doesn't stop you from making some new stuff, I dig your style and I'm sure that when you get some more mixing experience you'll make some killer tracks!!
Sure you can make a track smaller by decreasing the bitrate!! Just try 112kbps or 96kbps or VBR 
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