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Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 02-11-2002
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First thing I finished . Very basic song , no roller or dancefloorsmasher .
Please some comments , positive or negative , so I know what to keep and what to loose . This is not made for dancefloor , just home listening 
Thx and Thx to drumnbass.be for info and samplepacks .
LoRd - Cargo
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14-04-2003 13:07 |
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Surya
The Robot
Registration Date: 04-11-2002
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Don't you just love my samplepacks? 
Deff needs some crisper snare and some hihats, coz it al sounds a bit lofi now...
Not a bad track tho.
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14-04-2003 15:53 |
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Muffie
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Registration Date: 06-04-2003
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I like it
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14-04-2003 17:22 |
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LoRd
Cool Steppa
Registration Date: 02-11-2002
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thx for the replys
idd i forgot hihats , added it now but not sadifited with it .
Overall I am like what it has become but it needs more power 
but that will come in the following tunes
i hope
Cargo v1.2
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14-04-2003 18:38 |
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Surya
The Robot
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Yeah, could use some more power.
The problem with the hihats is that they sound quite lofi too...
Would add some delay to the beep in the intro too.
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14-04-2003 20:20 |
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thechronic
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Registration Date: 01-11-2002
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Listening to v1.2 now.
For a first track this is not bad at all, the music has a nice feel (except the hihats in the end...), but you need to get a feel for the balance too (the loudness of individual elements in the mix)
The distorted kick (or layered sample) you use on the first count of every bar is too loud compared to the other kicks, the hihats are too loud.
A good trick - when you're making a track take a break every hour and spin a couple of good dnb tracks. Then get back to your song, you'll then hear the things that are wrong
And what about adding a bassline too??
What programs are you using?
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