drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » charleskoncept - 000 Concept 11 (no mastering!!) charleskoncept - 000 Concept 11 (no mastering!!) Author Post charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  Please check out my new track '000 Concept 11 (no mastering!!)' and post your comments here!!! I know the last one wasnt much to look at. It wasnt done so i understand why there were no reviews. (thanks anyways Surya !) This one is a little more involved. i used some plugins and there are some effects. I just havent gotten the hang of mastering yet! So watch your speakers... (sorry) Umm let me know im especially looking for tips on mastering right now. And structure as always __ charleskoncept 02-11-2004 23:57 Surora23 Agressive Melodic Disorder Registration Date: 05-07-2004 Posts: 2,127 Helpfulness rating:  the intro is way tooooooo long...very empty...your bass is hardly audible...the entire track sounds liek ther is WAYYYYYYYYYY too much abience...(the hi string that is used gets very annoying IMO and too loud) i dont personally like the drums...im not a big fan of the delayed snares...just like overall i dont know what to say...it needs a lot of work...but maybe you are just starting to produce...wel all start somewhere... its a start...just keep going...instead of listening to DnB tracks for ideas...listen to rock, or even comercial dance music..its helps alot...goodluck hope that helped? __ Rinse it OUT!!!! 03-11-2004 00:36 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  I just started a couple of weeks ago.. like the beginning of Oct. -the intro is way too long hmmm.. i was thinking the same thing i listen to all sorts of music all the time but thanks for the help man, __ charleskoncept 03-11-2004 02:11 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  Intro is a bit too empty to be that long... It takes over a minute!!! Changes in volume and the basslines are too big and abrupt. Smoothen it out a bit. Hmmm, kicks and hats keep changing volume the whole time too. And they don't have any power... Really experimental, not really DnB, no? It's not that good either way, sorry __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 05-11-2004 14:20 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  I know its not that good, thanks man ... i dont need _you_ to tell me that. please keep in mind that i have only been doin this for a moonth and I have limited time to devout to it seein as i dont do it as a profession... thanks a bundle __ charleskoncept 05-11-2004 21:15 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by charleskoncept i dont need _you_ to tell me that. Sowwy bro __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 05-11-2004 21:32 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  Dont be sorry surya, i should really apologize, im just starting out and im really kinda sensitive about the whole thing. We all know we suk when we start , i just dont like to be told that. BUt thanks for the input ULtradark<- thanks for the input, __ charleskoncept 05-11-2004 22:06 pharmacite Producer Registration Date: 05-12-2004 Posts: 29 Helpfulness rating:  why would you even post this? post finished tracks people! not diddys and do-dahs! 09-12-2004 08:36 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by pharmacite why would you even post this? post finished tracks people! not diddys and do-dahs! who rhe fuck are you to judge i dont see nay of your masterpieces up here? __ charleskoncept 09-12-2004 10:16 Surya The Robot Registration Date: 04-11-2002 Posts: 11,238 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by charleskoncept quote: Originally posted by pharmacite why would you even post this? post finished tracks people! not diddys and do-dahs! who rhe fuck are you to judge i dont see nay of your masterpieces up here? Ho ho ho! Go easy man. He shouldn't have said that indeed, but don't start flaming please. @pharmacite: he's posting this to get feedback to know how to further develop the tune, not to show it off. So he's perfectly right in posting it here. __ "In dnb you should make people jump not swim" - Pieter Frenssen 2004 09-12-2004 10:26 charleskoncept Wicked Producer Registration Date: 29-09-2004 Posts: 318 Helpfulness rating:  quote: Originally posted by Surya quote: Originally posted by charleskoncept quote: Originally posted by pharmacite why would you even post this? post finished tracks people! not diddys and do-dahs! who rhe fuck are you to judge i dont see nay of your masterpieces up here? Ho ho ho! Go easy man. He shouldn't have said that indeed, but don't start flaming please. @pharmacite: he's posting this to get feedback to know how to further develop the tune, not to show it off. So he's perfectly right in posting it here. sorry bout that your right..... surya shoulda kept my cool wont happen again... __ charleskoncept 09-12-2004 10:30 marisol Steppa Registration Date: 23-09-2004 Posts: 279 Helpfulness rating:  I like the bassline its just that it needs to come out in fron a lot more. actualy the melody is very pleasing. might wanna but a limiter on the albino to put a lock down on those peaks and add some volume and mayby some compression to the bass and drums. deffinitly keep on it. dont let negative people get you down. oh yeah you might wanna add some random sounding stabs and sweeps to the intro to keep time and grab attention. 09-12-2004 13:56 Glim Stuck In The Late Nineties Registration Date: 16-10-2004 Posts: 1,848 Helpfulness rating:  yeah i've used that 'air-'sample before , it can really be good when played with a midi keyboard. okay i can see the picture ur trying to create with this intro, i have read the other reviews and i know u've only started to produce so its cool, not too sure what sort've feed back you wanted off this track but i've read ur previous review and i can see that u do know a good tune when you hear one and have a competant grasp of what a dnb track should entail. i think its cool that u've decided to produce this type of music, 4real so in this ur experimenting with some synths ,one with the volume needs attention at times, the delay on the beats is great for fill ins i find i think what u should really do is go to spinwarp.com and download the old tutorial for fruityloops 2 and that will give u a great outline for what a dnb break should sound like. u will get shit loads of advice and help with struturing compositions. its a real help then again u may already know of this and may not even use fruityloops so this will sound totally irrelevant.!! keep at it c.k G __ My Sounds 09-12-2004 17:21 drumnbass.be forum » Production » Tunes » charleskoncept - 000 Concept 11 (no mastering!!)