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RV_
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Registration Date: 26-11-2007
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Please check out my new track 'For The Night' and post your comments here!
Replace the Vocals?
Before I go any further and start touching it up.
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06-01-2012 19:59 |
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xGranty 
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If the vocals work for you then keep them, I think personally that they work but maybe where a bit to strong in the mix overall, nice tune man!
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07-01-2012 05:04 |
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BattleDrone
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I would try to correct the pitch on those vocals because it sounds a bit like the smurfs now.
Either that or replacing them with something that fits better within the tempo without pitching it up this much.
And please go easy on the panning with vocals, it sounds unnatural and with these smurf-like vocals it sounds like a mosquito circling your head :-)
Solid track though.Finish it!
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07-01-2012 13:09 |
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Glodaragz
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Nice track! I would add some slide effect when is the build up with kicks!
I like your change on the middle, there is no build up. That's make not monotone tune.
Your Drums are great, also the wobble is good too.
Also i would add some high fx. That will made your melody rich. Also you can add and low fx and make combination with the High 
That is my opinion at all, the tune is good but still need work.
Big ups!
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07-01-2012 22:16 |
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shir_pan
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liking the intro-keys. drops nice. wobble-bass is sometimes not completely in the rhythm. vocals fit for me thou not really my taste 
melodies sound nice. drums have a fresh feeling 
pretty great liquid track all in all
cheers!
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09-01-2012 23:25 |
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Dub Bananez
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Registration Date: 06-10-2010
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No, keep the vocals, they make the tune exciting and really give that late 90's vibe. I like it brutha, add some punch to the drums and limit and master. Maybe even pay $20 and have it professionaly master, what you have so far is worht it. You got a seller! Z
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16-01-2012 11:12 |
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