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Azlateen 
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Registration Date: 18-06-2009
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Please check out my new track 'Distance' and post your comments here!
Well, I'm a little stuck on this song.
Just a basic lowdown, I put an alternating mix between somewhat chill parts to a little more intense, and back. I got some ethnic instruments on top of the mix to add some flavor.
I know a lot of people don't like some of the ethnic flavors, so hopefully I made it a little more appealing. I just want some advice on making it sound more dnb with the ethnic sounds. I got the rhythm's down with how to make the beat, but the sounds probably aren't quite on par. I feel that's where I need the advice.
Preciate the help!
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18-05-2011 08:47 |
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shir_pan
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intro has a nice athmo. gettin confused at 0.46&1.53 a little, drums sound kinda mixed up, maybe some eq-ing would help that, also to give to kick more power, and maybe turn down the hats a little...i really like the pluck-melody btw 
in between the intro part again, sounds nice. i think some more buildups, breakdowns, drops would do this tune good, just to help connecting the two "parts" of the tune. great potential in there imo, like the style, cheers.
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18-05-2011 19:12 |
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BattleDrone
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The calm parts are a bit too calm and the instruments don't really tickle me.
The calm parts need something extra and perhaps (some) different instruments.
The heavier parts are nice but a bit repetitive at times.
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18-05-2011 20:52 |
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SKINLEY
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I'm not great on Ethnic sounds I'm afraid! But the Bass Synth doesn't fit the tune for some reason, something a little softer with not as much mid/high rasp. Could be a nice tune with a bit more work, try and think of an ethnic instrument that isn't used much! Google it?
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18-05-2011 21:07 |
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mattyb
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I would turn the bongo's and the tighten up down a bit, they are too overpowering. USe either a hp or lp to bring them in then drop a harder synth tto add to the more aggresive part and change up the b-line. Oh and the beginning i would add some kind of higher pitched synth line, or some arpped bleeps and blops. It's good though. I like it.
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19-05-2011 00:39 |
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tryptech
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Love the melodies, wuold choose othe rmidbass sound, drums are nice,may roll little more, but arent bad
rspct
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