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pusha
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Registration Date: 07-01-2010
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Please check out my new track 'A Wip' and post your comments here!
this is the start of a track im hoping to get a vocalist iv found on just wanted to get some feedback on if this is soundin ok , will vocals go with this ? do i need to make some more space ? i dunno had fun makin this one tho its a kind of liquid downtempo rollery thingymajiggy anyway enjoy (if u can ) ha big up
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02-04-2011 11:26 |
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Spectral Pace
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Registration Date: 19-09-2009
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Great atmospherics and pads in intro. Nice crisp beats also. Maybe have a tad more low end in that kick. Like the LFO, although it sounds like it hasn't got enough lower frequencies in it. I would maybe get the sub to modulate with the LFO so you get a really fat wobbling sound.
Like the stabs and other parts that come in. I think a vocalist would sound good on this tune. Look forward to hearing it.
All the best Bruv.
P.s. Andy C was heavy last night
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02-04-2011 13:19 |
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recon47 
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Registration Date: 05-01-2009
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Good stuff!
Kick needs a little more bottom to it,it gets a bit lost when the break comes in.
Drums over all are good and balanced fairly well but sound a bit too toppy to me, Kick/snare need to punch more and the break underneath them.
Mid bass lfo is good too i would either bring it down a touch or make the low fuller around it coz it dosent gel at the mo. Not too sure the stab with the delay on that comes in @2;12 fits with the rest of the track.
A nice female vocal would go well with the track but something subtle if you know what i mean?
Cheers
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02-04-2011 17:02 |
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shir_pan
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like the pads you used, track sounds a bit empty without them sometimes (between 1.29 and 2.00), also missin some more subbass, i like the liquidish drums, i can well imagine some nice delayed reverbed vocals to this one, lookin forward to listening to it 
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04-04-2011 14:27 |
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BBear
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Registration Date: 18-08-2010
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Very nice!
Nice pads
Kick could be more present after the bass drops in tho.
I like your bass-sound, very atmospheric.
Some subtle vocals would fit very well imo.
Nice dreamy feeling to this one!
Cheers!
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04-04-2011 19:32 |
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ulli
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Registration Date: 06-04-2011
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nice song you let me think on netsky i understand you had fun with makin this souns its give me a chill out feeling i don't think this song need a vocale its nice without vocals but maybe try to give it a hard whobbel i think is a littel bit to soft i just don't like the part asfrom 2:15 i think but that is myn opinion by this song i would try to find something else but the rest of this song is nice its make you fly like i set its give me a chill out feeling the feeling of liquid go on verry nice way better then my music
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07-04-2011 11:05 |
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tunedup
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Registration Date: 17-04-2011
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good intro, likit o solot, that dreamy, liquidy (your right) punchyy cruise beat, good suspence builder, i think vocals suits it supurbly, the hoover bassline could be more prominent, as it is very good, with a bit of variation every now and then,. although your vocals will obviously add a whole nother dimention, itll b great, im imagining, a female vocal, almost like sun chasers, fast and energetic, your on to a winner. hope your recording goes easy. nice1
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