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Please check out my new track 'Eager For U' and post your comments here!

Hey peeps. Another guitar track from me. Started couple of days ago. Its a mixture of deep/minimal with chill/atmo/orchestral stuff. Hope u gonna like it. Hit me uo with any suggestions.

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Very nice tune mateBigup
The intro is just lovely. The drums in it sounds nice. Love the melodies around 1:05. Everything sounds fine till 2:33. That guitar riff comes in and it makes the things a bit muffled. I'd try to cut the low end of it. The drums could be slightly louder in the faster part imo.
This track has much more potential, so work a bit more on it. Tongue Its still enjoyable tho.
Good work.
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I really liked this. Epic intro which sounds spot on with all the atmos stuff and the guitars in there (with great melody btw).Liked the second distorted guitar too, only thing that put me off a little were the drums,they seemed a little on the light side.Knock up a BC 'The Nine' or Johnny L 'Piper' break and your laughing.

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thanks for tips guys. Some good points. Work in progress

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havent been on here in a while, and what a great first track to listen to! incredible, really atmospheric and all the melodies an harmonies are really well put together. not usually a fan of guitar kinda dnb but this works. really intelligent stuff. spot on. Smile

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yo Timmi, been a while...thanks man, working hard on the track, made some improvements...watch for final version on dotbe...cheers mate

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Sounds nice mate, not really my style to tell the truth, but it's pretty well written.

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Love it. could feel the whole track just move through me.

Epic 10/10

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Actually this might be the track with the longest intro ever (2:30) and I love every second of it.
Very chill, very atmo. No real mistakes, only the drums lack a bit of power.

Close to sweet perfection.

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Actually this might be the track with the longest intro ever (2:30) and I love every second of it.
Very chill, very atmo. No mistakes. Sweet perfection.


dood thats what I thought too, hahahaSmile but what the hell, you gotta break the boundaries somehow Wink cheers for beauty simple review. Watch for final Wink

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i hate rock, i generally hate electric guitars in dnb tunes... but for some reason i love this track. big tune, i would try and find some slight faults in the track to give you some sort of critasism to work on but there is just no need.
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Wow i feel like im getting my toes sucked in the sauna. Really cool sound in this one at 1:12. I like how lush this is. Really lush and gorgeous. The guitar seems to be a tiny bit off tempo or something. Its not sitting all the way right in this mix. some talent here.

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nice intro and good pads . but something is missing i thing that is it better reese or some variable pads or some other variation of basses it is quite prosily, but i am not from far better so continue with patience and maybe u will be better i will do it same way :-)

in mid it is over bassed i think ... it is not good in my opinion
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hey... very nice song. i like the strings in the background. although because of the pads i expected an acoustic guitar or something. and another melody. regarding the guitar: this "country?" guitar sounds great. but im not friends with the "rock" guitar and its notes. ;-)
the pads have a cinematic feel. is it a sample or did you make them by yourself? song sounds well mixed and i like its structure.
1:27 until 2:33 is awesome!!!
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Like the bass in the intro, the drop could come a little sooner, started to get a little bored waiting for it. Like the guitars a lot. Are those guitars a VST or loops. The drumz can use a few more layers or limiting and compression. Dig it brutha. Cheers.

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cheers. Check out the finnished version. This one is just a preview. Guitars recorded by myself.

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cheers. Check out the finnished version. This one is just a preview. Guitars recorded by myself.


Awsome. Being able to play the Guitar is a plus. We will check it out. Z

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