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Please check out my new track 'Unnamed&unfinished' and post your comments here!

a little track i came up with, not finished yet need some critisism i think. well let me know, i know it sounds basic and shit borrin but hey first track ive made in months : ) hope you enjoy and come back for the finished product
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ez mate, I'm definitely feelin the drums on this one! Maybe they could use a bit of variation and spicing up a bit, maybe use some filter automation or something just to keep things interesting, if you think your track is boring then theres definitely gonna be someone else out there who thinks the same. With a few more parts and some bassline changeups this could be a good track. Lookin forward to hearing the finished thing.

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Vocal doesn't fit.
Track isn't as bad as you describe it. Some FX on the bass/lead could keep it more interesting. Track is too long now.

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yeah i know the vocal dnt fit, the first one aint even in time, gotta sample a film when i get the chance. yeah needs work man, more variations in the beatas n the bass, might jus scrp th whole bassline
well ayway cheers for the comments
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not too keen on that vocal sample mate other than that this is a pretty nice track. seems a little naked in places but the bass sample is really nice, finish this

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i like the lead synth but it could do with more movement cus there aint much else going on at the mo the drums are punchy but when it drops the bass lacks together ness (no play on words intended)i like the drums thgough but it need more andthe sub is a bit quiet man nice ideas though just mix it up more with some new elements
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not too keen on that synth from the off.

althought it sounds a lot better behind the drums. it is very stereo though, you checked to see what it sounds like when its summed to mono?

As said, the voice part doesn't fit too well.

Trouble is with this song is that although i like the bass line, its in exactly the same pattern/melody as the intro synth so the game has been given away before its begun therefore the bass line gets a lil boring after a short while.

But i have to reiterate i do like the bass line!!!Big Grin

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